Band 6.0 model answer
200 wordsThe two maps show the centre of a small town called Islip now and the plan for the future.
At the moment there is a main road in the middle of the town from west to east. There are shops on both sides of this road. In the north there is countryside, and in the south there is housing. There is also a park in the east and a school in the south-west.
In the future the main road will be only for pedestrians, so cars cannot use it. A new dual carriageway will be built around the town, so the traffic will go around the centre and not through it.
The countryside in the north will disappear. In this place they will build a bus station, a shopping centre and a car park. New housing will also be built in the north-east and in the middle of the town.
Some things will not change. The park will stay in the east, the school will stay in the south-west, and the shops on the south side of the road will also stay.
In conclusion, the town will become bigger and the centre will be much better for people who walk.
Why this is Band 6.0
- All the main proposed changes are identified, which secures Task Achievement at this level.
- Changes are listed one after another rather than grouped, and the distinction between present and planned is not always maintained by tense.
- Vocabulary is adequate but repetitive: built, new and there will be carry most of the meaning.
- Prepositions of place are limited, and sentence structures are mainly simple and compound.