Positive or Negative Development Family and children Task 2

In many families, both parents now work full time.

A full IELTS Writing Task 2 answer to this question at Band 6.0, 7.0, 8.5, with a paragraph plan, the vocabulary that fits this topic, and the reasons each answer scores what it does.

The question

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

In many families, both parents now work full time.

Is this a positive or a negative trend?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

How to read this question

This topic invites two failures. The first is treating it as a question about mothers rather than parents — the statement says both, and the essay should too. The second is discussing choice when for most households there is none, since two incomes are now required to meet costs that one used to cover. Handling both makes the answer noticeably more mature than the average response.

Paragraph plan

Introduction — Paraphrase, then give the verdict: positive in what it represents, but the working week and childcare have not adjusted, so families absorb the shortfall.

Body 1 — Why positive — financial resilience, women's independence, and the modelling effect on children.

Body 2 — The costs — a time deficit that falls unequally, and the fact that two incomes are now a requirement rather than a choice.

Conclusion — Positive as a change in who may work; negative in that institutions never adapted to it.

Model answers

Band 6.0 model answer

216 words

In the past, usually only the father worked and the mother stayed at home with the children. Today in many families both parents work full time. In my opinion, this change has more advantages than disadvantages.

Firstly, two salaries give the family a much better life. The parents can pay for a bigger flat, for good food, for extra lessons and for holidays. If one parent loses his job, the family still has money from the other parent, so the situation is safer.

Secondly, it is good for women. Before, many women stayed at home even if they studied at university, and they were completely dependent on their husband. Now a woman can use her education, build her career and have her own money, which is much more fair.

On the other hand, there is one big problem: time. When both parents come home at seven o'clock, they are tired, and they have only one or two hours with their children before bedtime. Small children spend all day in a kindergarten or with a grandmother, and some of them feel that their parents are always busy.

In conclusion, although working parents have less time for their family, I believe this development is positive because it gives financial security and gives women the same opportunities as men.

Why this is Band 6.0

  • A verdict is given and both sides are covered, but the essay treats childcare as a mother's issue rather than a household one.
  • Cohesion is clear and mechanical.
  • Vocabulary is adequate with repetition of parents, children and work.
  • Sentences are largely simple and compound with limited variety.

Band 7.0 model answer

284 words

Households in which both parents work full time are now the norm in most developed countries. I regard this as a positive development, although the arrangements surrounding it have not kept pace with it.

The clearest gains are financial and personal. Two incomes provide resilience: a redundancy or an illness that would once have been catastrophic becomes manageable, which matters more as employment has grown less secure. For women in particular the change is fundamental. Economic independence determines whether a person can leave an unhappy or dangerous relationship, and a woman who has remained in the labour market retains earning capacity, pension contributions and options that a long absence removes permanently. Children also grow up seeing both parents as workers and both as carers, which shapes what they assume is normal.

The difficulty is time, and it is genuine. Two full-time jobs remove roughly forty hours a week that were previously available for domestic work and childcare, and nothing has replaced them. Households absorb the shortfall through paid childcare where they can afford it, through grandparents where they are available, and through exhaustion where neither applies. Research consistently finds this shortfall is not shared evenly, with women continuing to perform the larger part of household work on top of full-time employment.

It is also worth noting that this is decreasingly a choice. Housing costs in particular now assume two incomes, so families are not selecting between one earner and two; they are meeting a requirement.

In conclusion, I consider the trend positive, since independence and financial security are substantial goods. The problem is that working hours, childcare provision and the division of domestic labour have not adjusted to a change that happened decades ago.

Why this is Band 7.0

  • The essay identifies that two incomes are now largely necessary rather than optional, which reframes the question accurately.
  • The time cost is developed into who actually absorbs it rather than asserted generally.
  • Less common lexis used accurately: dual-income, resilience, disproportionately, provision.
  • A good range of complex structures with only minor slips.

Band 8.5 model answer

439 words

Two-earner households are now standard across most of the developed world. I regard the change itself as clearly positive — but almost all of the harm attributed to it comes from the fact that nothing else changed with it, and separating those two things is what makes the question answerable.

What has been gained is substantial. Financial resilience is the least of it, though it matters: a household with two incomes survives a redundancy or an illness that would once have been ruinous, which is increasingly relevant as employment has become less secure. Far more important is what economic independence means for the person who previously did not have it. Whether someone can leave a failing or abusive relationship is largely determined by whether they can support themselves, and a decade out of the labour market removes earning capacity, seniority and pension contributions that are never fully recovered. Children raised in such households also grow up without the assumption that earning and caring are allocated by sex, which is not a small inheritance.

The cost is time, and the arithmetic is unforgiving: roughly forty hours a week that were previously spent on domestic work and childcare have been transferred to employment, and no institution absorbed them. The working day did not shorten, school hours still assume an adult available in the afternoon, and public childcare in most countries covers a fraction of what is needed at a price that consumes much of a second salary. Households therefore meet the shortfall privately — through grandparents, through paid help, or through sheer exhaustion — and the evidence is consistent that the residue falls disproportionately on women, who take on what is often called the second shift.

There is a further consequence that is rarely stated plainly. When most households acquired a second income, the money did not simply raise living standards; a large part of it was bid into housing. Prices rose to what dual-income families could pay, and were then capitalised into what everyone must pay. The result is that two salaries have become the entry requirement rather than the upgrade, and a family wanting one parent at home frequently cannot choose it. A change that began as an expansion of options has partly closed the option it replaced.

My verdict, then, is positive but pointed. The movement of both parents into paid work reflects a genuine and hard-won expansion of freedom, and I would not reverse it. What deserves criticism is a forty-year institutional lag — working hours, school timetables, childcare and the domestic division of labour all still configured for a household that has largely ceased to exist.

Why this is Band 8.5

  • Separates the change itself from the failure of institutions to adapt, which produces a precise verdict instead of a balance of benefits and costs.
  • Makes the point that housing costs have absorbed the second income, so the arrangement is now a requirement — a structural observation few answers reach.
  • Handles the gendered division of labour accurately and without either avoiding it or making it the whole essay.
  • Lexis is precise and idiomatic: dual-income, capitalised into, the second shift, resilience, bid up, lag.
  • Wide structural range used flexibly, with a cleft, fronted concessives and controlled parenthesis; errors are rare and minor.

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Vocabulary for this topic

Word or phraseMeaningUsed in a sentence
dual-income householda home where both adults earnDual-income households are now the norm.
resiliencethe ability to absorb a shock without collapsingTwo incomes give a family financial resilience.
the second shiftdomestic work done after a full day of paid employmentWomen continue to perform most of the second shift.
to be capitalised into priceswhen extra income is absorbed by higher prices, especially housingThe second income was largely capitalised into house prices.
to bid upto push prices higher through competitionDual incomes bid up housing costs.
institutional lagwhen rules and services fail to adapt to social changeSchool hours are a clear case of institutional lag.

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Common questions

Is this a question about mothers?

No — the statement says both parents, and answering as though childcare were solely a mother's concern narrows the task and dates the essay badly. You can still discuss the unequal division of domestic work; the difference is treating it as a finding rather than an assumption.

How do I separate a change from its consequences?

Say explicitly that the harm comes from what did not adapt rather than from the change itself, then structure the essay around that. It produces a clear verdict and avoids the common trap of concluding that something is simultaneously good and bad with no resolution.

Can I mention housing costs in a family question?

Yes, and it is one of the strongest points available. Showing that the second income was absorbed by prices explains why the arrangement stopped being optional, which turns a familiar topic into a structural argument.