Band 6.0 model answer
227 wordsIn many countries people eat less traditional food than before and choose international fast food instead. In my opinion, this is a negative development for health and for culture.
It is true that fast food has some advantages. It is cheap, it is ready in five minutes, and it tastes the same in every restaurant, so people know exactly what they will receive. For a student or for a worker who has only thirty minutes for lunch, this is very convenient, and cooking a traditional dish sometimes takes two or three hours.
However, the disadvantages are more serious. Fast food usually contains a lot of fat, sugar and salt, and when people eat it every day, they gain weight and can develop diabetes or heart problems. The number of overweight children has increased in many countries for this reason.
In addition, traditional food is part of the culture of a nation. Recipes pass from grandmother to mother and from mother to daughter, and if young people stop cooking these dishes, this knowledge disappears. Traditional meals also bring the family together, because everybody sits at the table, while fast food is often eaten alone or in front of a screen.
In conclusion, although fast food saves time and money, I believe this change is negative because it damages people's health and destroys an important part of national culture.
Why this is Band 6.0
- A verdict is given and both sides are covered, but the argument is largely assertion.
- Cohesion is clear and mechanical.
- Vocabulary is adequate with repetition of food, people and traditional.
- Sentences are mainly simple and compound with limited variety.