Positive or Negative Development Technology Task 2

In many countries people now do most of their shopping online rather than in physical shops.

A full IELTS Writing Task 2 answer to this question at Band 6.0, 7.0, 8.5, with a paragraph plan, the vocabulary that fits this topic, and the reasons each answer scores what it does.

The question

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

In many countries people now do most of their shopping online rather than in physical shops.

Is this a positive or negative development?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

How to read this question

This is an opinion question wearing a different costume. "Is this a positive or negative development?" requires a verdict, and the most common way to lose marks is to write a balanced essay that never delivers one. You may say it is both, but only if you state which side outweighs the other. Note also that the statement is about a shift in <em>where</em> people shop, not about whether shopping is good — the essay must be about the consequences of the shift.

Paragraph plan

Introduction — Paraphrase the shift, then give the verdict: largely positive, with one serious qualification about what is lost locally.

Body 1 — Why positive — choice, price and access, with the strongest case being access for people the high street never served well.

Body 2 — The real cost — not shop closures in themselves but the loss of the local economic and social function they performed.

Conclusion — Net positive, but the losses fall unevenly and that is a policy problem rather than a reason to reverse the trend.

Model answers

Band 6.0 model answer

215 words

In recent years, a lot of people prefer to buy things on the internet instead of going to real shops. In my opinion, this is mostly a positive development, but it also creates some problems.

Firstly, online shopping is very convenient. People can buy products at any time, even at night, and they do not need to travel to the city centre or wait in a queue. This is very useful for busy people, for parents with small children and for old people who cannot walk a long distance.

Secondly, the prices on the internet are usually lower. There are many websites selling the same product, so the customer can compare and choose the cheapest one. Also, internet shops do not pay for a big building in the centre of the city, so they can sell cheaper than normal shops.

However, there are also negative effects. Many traditional shops are closing because they cannot compete, and their workers lose their jobs. In addition, some people, especially elderly people, feel lonely because going to the shop was a chance to meet other people and to talk with them.

In conclusion, although online shopping causes some problems for small shops, I believe it is a positive development because it saves time and money for millions of customers.

Why this is Band 6.0

  • A verdict is given and both sides are covered, which satisfies the task, but the reasons stay general — the essay says prices are cheaper without explaining why.
  • Cohesion is clear but mechanical, with a connector opening almost every paragraph and sentence.
  • Vocabulary is adequate with repetition of shopping, shops and people.
  • Structures are mainly simple and compound; the complex sentences follow one pattern.

Band 7.0 model answer

280 words

Retail has shifted decisively online in many countries, with a growing share of purchases made from home rather than in shops. On balance I regard this as a positive development, though the costs it imposes are real and fall on particular groups rather than being spread evenly.

The clearest benefit is access. Physical retail has always worked well for people who live in cities, have transport and can shop during working hours, and rather badly for everyone else. Online shopping removes those conditions: someone in a small town now has the same range available as someone in the capital, and a person with limited mobility can buy without a journey that might previously have taken half a day. Lower prices reinforce this, since online sellers avoid the overheads of a city-centre lease and competition between them is far more visible to the customer.

The costs, however, are more serious than the usual complaint about shop closures suggests. A high street is not only a set of businesses; it is where a certain amount of local employment, social contact and passing trade happens at once. When footfall falls, the loss is not confined to the shops that close — cafés, small services and market stalls that depended on people already being there go with them, and the effect on an elderly customer for whom the shop was a daily conversation is not captured by any price comparison.

In conclusion, I believe the shift is positive because it has widened access far more than it has narrowed it, but the losses are concentrated in places and among people least able to absorb them, and that deserves a policy response rather than dismissal.

Why this is Band 7.0

  • The verdict is clear in the introduction and the essay argues for it rather than reporting both sides neutrally.
  • The strongest point is properly developed — access for people the high street served badly is explained, not asserted.
  • Less common lexis used accurately: overheads, marginal, mobility, footfall.
  • Range includes concession, conditionals and relative clauses, with only minor slips.

Band 8.5 model answer

400 words

The move of retail from the high street to the screen is among the fastest changes in ordinary economic life of the past two decades. I regard it as a net positive, and I think the honest case for that verdict has to begin by acknowledging that the losses are not imaginary — they are simply narrower, and differently distributed, than the people defending the high street usually claim.

The strongest argument in its favour is not convenience but access, and the distinction matters. Physical retail quietly rationed choice by geography: what you could buy depended on what a local owner judged worth stocking for a small captive market, which meant rural customers paid more for less and anyone with limited mobility paid in time and difficulty. Online selling dissolves that constraint almost entirely. The person who has gained most is not the busy professional saving twenty minutes, but the customer for whom the previous system barely worked at all — and that is a considerably better reason to welcome a change than saving a queue.

The objection deserves to be put at its strongest, though, and it is usually put too weakly. The problem is not that shops close; businesses have always closed. It is that a high street performs functions incidental to selling — it concentrates people in one place, which sustains cafés, small services and casual employment that exist only because footfall exists, and it supplies routine social contact to people who have little other source of it. Take away the retail anchor and this whole agglomeration unwinds, which is why a town's decline looks so disproportionate to the number of shops actually lost.

What this tells us, however, is that the loss is a loss of function rather than of shopping, and functions can be housed differently. Reversing the trend is neither possible nor desirable; what is possible is refusing to let town centres be defined solely by retail — which is a question of what those spaces are allowed to become, not of whether people should be made to shop in them.

My verdict, then, is that this is a positive development whose costs are unusually concentrated. That combination — broad diffuse gains, narrow acute losses — is exactly the pattern that produces genuine hardship alongside genuine progress, and treating it as an argument against the change mistakes a distribution problem for a direction problem.

Why this is Band 8.5

  • Delivers an unambiguous verdict and then defends it, while still treating the opposing case seriously — the balance is in the argument, not in a refusal to decide.
  • Reframes the strongest objection: identifies that the real loss is the high street's function rather than the shops themselves, which is a genuinely different and better point than "shops are closing".
  • The conclusion locates the problem precisely (distribution of costs, not the trend) rather than restating the verdict.
  • Lexis is precise and idiomatic — agglomeration, incidental, hollowing out, captive, net — used to make distinctions.
  • Structures are varied and controlled, including a cleft, fronted concessives and embedded comment; errors are rare and minor.

Model answers written and reviewed by The English All-in-One IELTS team. They are teaching models showing what each band looks like, not real candidate scripts.

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Vocabulary for this topic

Word or phraseMeaningUsed in a sentence
overheadsthe ongoing costs of running a business, such as rentOnline sellers avoid the overheads of a city-centre lease.
footfallthe number of people walking through a shopping areaWhen footfall falls, nearby cafés close too.
captive marketcustomers who have no realistic alternative supplierRural shoppers were a captive market and paid more for less.
incidentalhappening as a side effect rather than as the main purposeA high street performs functions incidental to selling.
agglomerationa cluster of activity that exists because everything is in one placeRemove the anchor shop and the whole agglomeration unwinds.
to hollow outto gradually empty something of substanceTown centres have been hollowed out by the shift online.
net (adj.)remaining after gains and losses are balanced against each otherI regard the change as a net positive.
mobilitythe ability to move around easilyCustomers with limited mobility have gained the most.

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Common questions

Can I say the development is both positive and negative?

Only if you say which side outweighs the other. "Is this positive or negative?" asks for a verdict, and an essay that presents both sides evenly and never decides cannot score above Band 6 for Task Response, however good the English is. The phrase to reach for is "on balance" — then commit.

Is this the same as an advantages and disadvantages question?

No, and confusing them is costly. Advantages/disadvantages asks you to outline both; positive/negative asks you to evaluate. You can use similar content, but this question type must end with a judgement, and the judgement should be visible in the introduction as well as the conclusion.

Should I write about my own country?

Only where it genuinely illustrates the point, and explain it if you do. A named place with no explanation adds nothing. A described situation — a small town losing its shops, and what happened next — supports the argument whether or not the examiner knows the place.

Is it acceptable to concede that the other side has a real point?

It is one of the clearest markers of Band 7 and above. The Band 8.5 model puts the objection more strongly than its opponents usually do, then answers it. What you must not do is concede and then leave the concession standing — every point you grant needs a reply.