Band 6.0 model answer
231 wordsToday English is used in international business, in science and in many universities around the world. In my opinion, this situation has more advantages than disadvantages, but it also creates some risks for other languages.
Firstly, a common language makes communication much easier. A businessman from Japan and a businessman from Brazil can discuss a contract without a translator, and scientists from different countries can read the same research and work together. If everybody used only their own language, international cooperation would be very slow and very expensive.
Secondly, English gives opportunities to individual people. A student who knows English can study in many countries, read millions of books and websites, and find a better job in an international company. For young people in small countries, this is a very important advantage.
On the other hand, there are dangers. When universities teach only in English, scientific words do not develop in the national language, and after some years people cannot discuss science in their own country. Some small languages can even disappear completely. In addition, native speakers of English have an unfair advantage, because they do not spend years learning a foreign language and they always express their ideas better in meetings.
In conclusion, I think the dominance of English is mainly positive because it helps communication and gives opportunities, but governments should protect their own languages in education and culture.
Why this is Band 6.0
- A verdict is given and both sides are covered, but the points are asserted rather than explained.
- Cohesion is clear and mechanical.
- Vocabulary is adequate with repetition of English, language and people.
- Sentences are largely simple and compound with some correct complex clauses.