Advantages and Disadvantages Society Task 2

Large supermarkets have replaced most small local shops in many towns.

A full IELTS Writing Task 2 answer to this question at Band 6.0, 7.0, 8.5, with a paragraph plan, the vocabulary that fits this topic, and the reasons each answer scores what it does.

The question

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Large supermarkets have replaced most small local shops in many towns.

What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

How to read this question

The organising idea worth reaching for is that supermarkets did not simply outcompete small shops on price — they changed what a shop is for, absorbing the butcher, baker, greengrocer and pharmacy into one trip. That explains both the scale of the convenience gain and why the loss is felt as more than a commercial one, and it keeps the essay away from simple nostalgia.

Paragraph plan

Introduction — Paraphrase the trend, then signpost: substantial gains in price, range and time; losses in local employment structure, in access for the immobile, and in the social function of a high street.

Body 1 — Advantages — buying power lowers prices for people who need that most, and one trip replaces five.

Body 2 — Disadvantages — money leaves the area rather than circulating in it, out-of-town siting excludes those without cars, and the incidental social contact disappears.

Conclusion — The gains are real and unevenly matched by the losses, which fall on the least mobile.

Model answers

Band 6.0 model answer

255 words

In many towns the small family shops have closed and big supermarkets have taken their place. This change brings advantages for customers, but it also creates problems for the community.

The main advantage is price and choice. A supermarket buys enormous quantities directly from producers, so it can sell much cheaper than a small shop. For a family with a low salary, this difference is very important. The customer can also find everything in one building: bread, meat, vegetables, medicine and clothes, so he saves a lot of time.

Another advantage is quality control and working hours. Big shops have refrigerators, they check the products, and many of them are open until late in the evening or twenty-four hours, which is very useful for people who finish work at nine o'clock.

On the other hand, small shops give work to local families, and the money stays in the town. When a supermarket opens, the profit goes to the head office in the capital or even to another country, and the town becomes poorer.

In addition, supermarkets are usually built outside the town, so a person needs a car. Old people who cannot drive lose their nearest shop and depend on their children. The small shop was also a place where neighbours met and talked, and for a person living alone this was sometimes the only conversation of the day.

In conclusion, supermarkets give cheaper products and save time, but they take money out of the local economy and create difficulties for people without a car.

Why this is Band 6.0

  • Both sides are covered with relevant points, but they are stated rather than developed.
  • Cohesion is clear and mechanical.
  • Vocabulary is adequate with repetition of shops, people and prices.
  • Sentences are largely simple and compound with limited variety.

Band 7.0 model answer

289 words

Large supermarkets have displaced most independent shops in many towns. The benefits to the individual shopper are substantial, though what the community loses is less visible on a receipt.

The clearest advantage is cost. Economies of scale allow a chain to negotiate directly with producers, absorb distribution internally and operate on margins no independent retailer can match, and the resulting price difference matters most to precisely the households with least to spend. Convenience compounds this: a single trip now replaces visits to a butcher, a baker, a greengrocer and a pharmacy, which is a considerable saving of time for anyone working full time or caring for children.

There are secondary benefits in reliability and hours. Consistent stock, refrigeration and late opening suit people whose schedules do not fit the traditional shopping day, and for shift workers this is not a luxury.

The principal disadvantage is where the money goes. An independent shop spends its takings locally — on staff who live nearby, on local suppliers and services — so each pound circulates several times within the area. A chain remits its profit to a head office elsewhere, so the same spending leaves the local economy almost immediately, and a town can feel poorer while its residents shop more cheaply.

Siting creates a second problem. Large stores are typically built out of town, which assumes a car; those without one, disproportionately the elderly and the poor, lose their nearest shop and gain one they cannot reach. The incidental social contact that a daily local shop provided also disappears, which matters most to people who live alone.

In conclusion, supermarkets deliver genuine savings in money and time, but the costs fall on local economies and on those least able to travel.

Why this is Band 7.0

  • The essay explains how buying power produces lower prices rather than asserting it.
  • The point about money circulating locally is developed into a mechanism.
  • Less common lexis used accurately: economies of scale, circulate, mobility, out-of-town.
  • A good range of complex structures with only minor slips.

Band 8.5 model answer

464 words

Supermarkets did not simply undercut independent shops; they redefined what a shopping trip is. Absorbing the butcher, the baker, the greengrocer and the pharmacy into a single visit changed the unit of comparison from price per item to time and money per week — and once that shift occurred, no specialist retailer could compete on the terms customers were actually using. Both the advantages and the disadvantages follow from that consolidation.

The gains to the individual shopper are large and should not be understated by people who can afford to romanticise the alternative. Economies of scale in purchasing, distribution and storage produce prices independents cannot approach, and the households for whom that difference is decisive are the poorest ones. The saving in time is comparable: five errands become one, which for a full-time worker or a parent is not a marginal convenience but the difference between managing the week and not. Reliable stock and long opening hours extend the same benefit to people whose schedules never matched traditional retail hours.

What is lost is partly economic and partly structural. The economic loss operates through the local multiplier: an independent retailer spends its takings nearby — wages to local staff, local suppliers, a local accountant — so each pound recirculates within the area several times before leaving. A chain remits surplus to a head office elsewhere, so the same transaction exits almost immediately. A town can therefore become measurably poorer while every household in it shops more cheaply, which is why the effect is so easily missed.

The structural loss concerns siting and agglomeration. Large stores are built where land is cheap, which means out of town and reachable by car. For the mobility-poor — predominantly the elderly and those on low incomes — the nearest shop is replaced by one they cannot get to, which is an absolute loss rather than a trade-off. And because a high street's smaller businesses depended on the footfall the food shops generated, removing the anchor unwinds the cafés, hardware shops and services that were never in direct competition with the supermarket at all.

The final consideration is the incidental social function. A daily shop within walking distance supplied routine, unarranged contact with other people, and for someone living alone it was frequently the only such contact of the day. That is not a service anyone was paying for, which is exactly why nothing replaced it when the transaction moved elsewhere.

The advantages, then, are concentrated in price and time and are enjoyed by almost everyone, while the disadvantages are concentrated in place and mobility and fall on a minority who tend to have the fewest alternatives — an asymmetry that explains why the same change was experienced as straightforward progress by most people and as abandonment by some.

Why this is Band 8.5

  • Identifies that supermarkets changed the function of shopping rather than merely undercutting prices, which organises both sides of the answer.
  • Explains the local multiplier precisely, giving the economic objection a mechanism rather than a sentiment.
  • Notes that gains and losses accrue to different people, making the analysis distributional rather than a simple balance — and does so without declaring which side wins, which this question does not ask for.
  • Lexis is precise and idiomatic: economies of scale, local multiplier, agglomeration, anchor, incidental, mobility-poor.
  • Wide and flexible structural range including a cleft, inversion and controlled parenthesis; errors are rare and minor.

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Vocabulary for this topic

Word or phraseMeaningUsed in a sentence
economies of scalecost advantages that come from operating at large sizeEconomies of scale allow chains to undercut independents.
local multiplierhow many times money recirculates within an areaIndependent shops have a much higher local multiplier.
anchor (store)a large business whose customers sustain nearby shopsRemoving the anchor unwinds the surrounding high street.
agglomerationthe benefit businesses gain from being clustered togetherOut-of-town siting destroys the agglomeration a high street depends on.
mobility-poorhaving limited ability to travel, often lacking a carMobility-poor residents lose their nearest shop entirely.
incidental (contact)happening as a side effect rather than being arrangedThe local shop supplied incidental social contact.

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Common questions

How do I write about change without sounding nostalgic?

Explain the mechanism instead of mourning the outcome. "Money leaves the area immediately rather than recirculating" is an argument; "things were better before" is a mood. Nostalgia is the most common way essays on this topic lose credibility.

Should I acknowledge that the cheaper option helps poor households?

Yes — it is the strongest point on that side and omitting it makes the essay look one-sided. Conceding that the gains matter most to those with least money makes your subsequent criticism far more persuasive.

Is it worth noting who gains and who loses?

It is one of the clearest markers of a high-band answer. Observing that advantages are broad and shallow while disadvantages are narrow and severe explains why opinion on the change divides so sharply, which no simple list of pros and cons can do.