Advantages and Disadvantages Tourism and travel Task 2

Some countries limit the number of visitors allowed at popular natural sites each day.

A full IELTS Writing Task 2 answer to this question at Band 6.0, 7.0, 8.5, with a paragraph plan, the vocabulary that fits this topic, and the reasons each answer scores what it does.

The question

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Some countries limit the number of visitors allowed at popular natural sites each day.

Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

How to read this question

The organising question is how the limited places get allocated. A cap protects the site — that part is straightforward — but whoever designs it decides who gets in, and the usual mechanisms quietly select by wealth or by planning ability. Making the rationing method the centre of the essay produces a far more interesting answer than listing conservation against inconvenience.

Paragraph plan

Introduction — Paraphrase, then signpost: caps genuinely protect sites and improve the visit, but they create a rationing problem whose usual solutions favour the affluent.

Body 1 — Advantages — ecological recovery, a better experience for those admitted, and local communities regaining control.

Body 2 — Disadvantages — allocation by price or by advance planning excludes the poor and the spontaneous, and local economies dependent on volume lose income.

Conclusion — The cap is defensible; how the places are distributed is the part that decides whether it is fair.

Model answers

Band 6.0 model answer

259 words

Some countries have decided to allow only a fixed number of tourists to enter famous natural places such as beaches, mountains or national parks. This rule has advantages, but it also creates problems.

The main advantage is protection of nature. When thousands of people walk on the same path every day, the plants die, the soil becomes hard and animals leave the area. If only five hundred people enter each day, nature has time to recover, and the place will still exist for the next generation.

Another advantage is the quality of the visit. Nobody enjoys a beautiful mountain when there is a queue of two hundred people on the path and it is impossible to take a photograph without a crowd. With fewer visitors, people can hear the birds and actually see the place they travelled to see.

On the other hand, this rule is not fair for everybody. Usually the tickets must be bought several months before, so a person who plans his holiday carefully receives a place, and a person who decides suddenly cannot enter. Sometimes the price of these limited tickets is very high, so only rich tourists can visit.

In addition, local people can lose money. In many small towns, hotels, restaurants and guides live from tourists. If the number of visitors is reduced by half, some of these businesses will close and people will lose their jobs.

In conclusion, limiting visitors protects nature and makes the experience better, but it can exclude people with less money and reduce the income of local families.

Why this is Band 6.0

  • Both sides are covered with relevant points, but they are stated rather than developed.
  • Cohesion is clear and mechanical.
  • Vocabulary is adequate with repetition of tourists, place and nature.
  • Sentences are largely simple and compound with limited variety.

Band 7.0 model answer

283 words

A number of countries now cap the number of visitors admitted daily to popular natural sites. The conservation case is strong; the difficulties arise almost entirely from how the limited places are distributed.

The primary advantage is ecological. Natural environments have a carrying capacity beyond which damage is not gradual but rapid — paths widen and erode, vegetation is trampled faster than it regenerates, and wildlife abandons areas of constant disturbance. A daily limit keeps use below that threshold and allows recovery between visits, which is the only reliable method of preserving a site that people genuinely want to see.

A second advantage is the quality of the experience. Crowding destroys precisely what visitors travel for, and a site limited to a few hundred people delivers something closer to what was advertised. Communities also regain a measure of control, since a capped site can be managed rather than merely endured.

The main disadvantage is that a cap requires rationing, and the usual methods select particular kinds of people. Booking months in advance favours those with predictable schedules and the confidence to plan, while auctioning or pricing permits highly favours the wealthy — so a resource that is nominally public becomes accessible mainly to the organised and the affluent.

There is also an economic cost to nearby communities whose hotels, guides and restaurants are sized for higher volumes. This is manageable where visitor spending per head rises to compensate, but the transition harms businesses built around large numbers, and those are often the smallest.

In conclusion, visitor caps protect sites effectively and improve the visit, but they create an allocation problem whose standard solutions exclude people on grounds unrelated to their interest in going.

Why this is Band 7.0

  • The essay identifies allocation as the source of the disadvantages rather than the cap itself.
  • The local economy point is developed with the distinction between volume and value.
  • Less common lexis used accurately: carrying capacity, allocation, degradation, ration.
  • A good range of complex structures with only minor slips.

Band 8.5 model answer

429 words

Capping daily admissions to popular natural sites is unusual among conservation measures in that its central benefit is barely disputed. Ecosystems have a carrying capacity, damage beyond it is rapid rather than gradual, and no amount of visitor education substitutes for simply having fewer feet on the ground. The genuinely contested question is not whether to limit numbers but how the limited places are allocated — and that is where the disadvantages live.

The ecological advantage is worth stating precisely, because it explains why softer measures fail. Degradation is not proportional to use: a path absorbs traffic with little visible change until a threshold is passed, after which erosion accelerates sharply and vegetation cannot regenerate between visits. Since the harm is non-linear, the only reliable intervention is a quantity limit. Wildlife responds similarly, abandoning areas of continuous disturbance regardless of how respectfully individuals behave.

A second advantage is that a cap protects the experience it rations. Crowding destroys exactly the qualities — quiet, space, the impression of wildness — that brought people, so a site admitting a few hundred visitors delivers something recognisably better than the same site admitting several thousand. This also gives host communities the ability to manage a place rather than absorb whatever arrives.

The disadvantages follow from the necessity of rationing. Every allocation mechanism selects a type of person, and the common ones select badly. Advance booking rewards those with predictable schedules, reliable internet and the habit of planning holidays months ahead; high permit prices ration by wealth outright. In both cases a public natural asset becomes de facto reserved for the organised and the affluent, which is a poor outcome for something usually held in common.

The economic objection — that local businesses lose income — is real but weaker than it first appears. What sustains a local economy is visitor spending rather than visitor count, and capped sites frequently raise yield per visitor, since scarcity supports higher prices and longer stays. The genuine casualties are businesses built specifically around high volume and low margin, which is a transitional problem rather than a permanent one, though it falls on the smallest operators first.

The balance, then, is that the cap itself is well justified and its costs are almost entirely a function of design. A lottery with a proportion of places held for same-day release, reduced rates for residents, and permits that cannot be resold would preserve the conservation benefit while removing most of the unfairness — which suggests the disadvantages of this policy are not inherent to it but chosen, usually by default.

Why this is Band 8.5

  • Makes the rationing mechanism the organising idea, which reframes the disadvantages as design choices rather than inevitable costs.
  • Distinguishes visitor volume from visitor value, showing why the economic objection is weaker than it appears.
  • Proposes that the allocation method is where fairness is decided, giving the conclusion analytical work rather than summary.
  • Lexis is precise and idiomatic: carrying capacity, rationing, allocation mechanism, degradation, yield, de facto.
  • Wide structural range used flexibly, with a cleft, fronted concessives and controlled parenthesis; errors are rare and minor.

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Vocabulary for this topic

Word or phraseMeaningUsed in a sentence
carrying capacitythe number of visitors a place can absorb without damageDamage accelerates once carrying capacity is exceeded.
rationingdistributing something limited among more people than can have itA cap necessarily requires rationing.
allocation mechanismthe method used to decide who receives a limited placeEvery allocation mechanism selects a type of person.
non-linearnot increasing steadily; changing sharply past a pointErosion is non-linear, which is why quantity limits work.
yield (per visitor)how much money each visitor generatesCapped sites often raise yield per visitor.
de factoin practice, whatever the official positionThe site becomes de facto reserved for the affluent.

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Common questions

How do I turn a disadvantage into an interesting argument?

Ask whether it is inherent or chosen. Here the unfairness comes from how permits are distributed, not from the cap itself — which means it is a design flaw rather than a necessary cost. That distinction is exactly the kind of analysis that lifts Task Response.

Can I challenge a disadvantage I have just raised?

Yes, and it demonstrates evaluation. Noting that local income depends on spending rather than headcount weakens the economic objection without dismissing it, which reads as balanced judgement rather than as contradiction.

Should I suggest improvements in this question type?

Briefly, in the conclusion, if they clarify your analysis. A sentence proposing lotteries or resident rates shows why you consider the drawbacks avoidable. Developing solutions at length would answer a different question.