Band 6.0 model answer
259 wordsSome countries have decided to allow only a fixed number of tourists to enter famous natural places such as beaches, mountains or national parks. This rule has advantages, but it also creates problems.
The main advantage is protection of nature. When thousands of people walk on the same path every day, the plants die, the soil becomes hard and animals leave the area. If only five hundred people enter each day, nature has time to recover, and the place will still exist for the next generation.
Another advantage is the quality of the visit. Nobody enjoys a beautiful mountain when there is a queue of two hundred people on the path and it is impossible to take a photograph without a crowd. With fewer visitors, people can hear the birds and actually see the place they travelled to see.
On the other hand, this rule is not fair for everybody. Usually the tickets must be bought several months before, so a person who plans his holiday carefully receives a place, and a person who decides suddenly cannot enter. Sometimes the price of these limited tickets is very high, so only rich tourists can visit.
In addition, local people can lose money. In many small towns, hotels, restaurants and guides live from tourists. If the number of visitors is reduced by half, some of these businesses will close and people will lose their jobs.
In conclusion, limiting visitors protects nature and makes the experience better, but it can exclude people with less money and reduce the income of local families.
Why this is Band 6.0
- Both sides are covered with relevant points, but they are stated rather than developed.
- Cohesion is clear and mechanical.
- Vocabulary is adequate with repetition of tourists, place and nature.
- Sentences are largely simple and compound with limited variety.