Advantages and Disadvantages Society Task 2

Many countries encourage their citizens to retire later than in the past.

A full IELTS Writing Task 2 answer to this question at Band 6.0, 7.0, 8.5, with a paragraph plan, the vocabulary that fits this topic, and the reasons each answer scores what it does.

The question

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Many countries encourage their citizens to retire later than in the past.

What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

How to read this question

The organising insight is that a later retirement age is a single rule applied to people whose bodies and life expectancies differ enormously. The same policy is a mild inconvenience to a professional and a serious injustice to someone who did manual work from sixteen — and since poorer workers also die younger, they lose a larger share of the retirement they paid for. That distributional point turns a routine list into a real argument.

Paragraph plan

Introduction — Paraphrase, then signpost: genuine gains in public finances and in individual purpose; costs concentrated on manual workers and on those with shorter lives.

Body 1 — Advantages — fiscal sustainability, retained expertise, and the fact that many people want to keep working.

Body 2 — Disadvantages — physical capacity varies by occupation, life expectancy varies by income, and older workers face hiring discrimination that makes 'work longer' hollow.

Conclusion — Uniformity is the problem; the case for later retirement is strong and the case for applying it identically is not.

Model answers

Band 6.0 model answer

232 words

In many countries the government has increased the age when people can receive a pension. This decision has some advantages, but also several disadvantages.

The first advantage is economic. People today live much longer than fifty years ago, so if everybody retires at sixty, the state must pay a pension for twenty-five or thirty years. When people work five years more, the government collects more taxes and pays fewer years of pension, so the system does not collapse.

Another advantage is for the person. Some people feel useless and become depressed when they suddenly stop working, and they lose contact with their colleagues. If they continue working, they keep their routine, they stay active and they also earn more money for their old age.

However, there are serious disadvantages. Not all jobs are the same. An office worker can easily work until sixty-seven, but a builder or a miner has back problems and cannot do heavy physical work at this age. For these people, a later retirement means several years of pain or of unemployment.

In addition, older workers occupy positions that young people need. If a company does not have free places, young graduates cannot start their career, and youth unemployment increases.

In conclusion, working longer helps the state budget and keeps people active, but it is unfair for people with physically difficult jobs and may create problems for young workers.

Why this is Band 6.0

  • Both sides are covered with relevant points, but they are stated rather than developed.
  • Cohesion is clear and mechanical.
  • Vocabulary is adequate with repetition of old people, work and pension.
  • Sentences are largely simple and compound with limited variety.

Band 7.0 model answer

310 words

Many governments now encourage or require citizens to work beyond the retirement ages set in previous generations. The arguments in favour are substantial, but so are the objections, and both depend heavily on who is being asked to work longer.

The fiscal case is the strongest. Life expectancy has risen by roughly a decade in many countries without a corresponding change in retirement age, so pensions that were designed to fund perhaps a decade of retirement now fund two or three. Each additional working year both adds tax revenue and removes a year of payments, which is why almost every government facing an ageing population has reached for this lever.

There are individual benefits too. A significant proportion of people find that abrupt retirement removes structure, purpose and daily social contact simultaneously, and report declining wellbeing as a result. Continued employment maintains income, routine and status, and organisations retain expertise that takes decades to accumulate.

The principal objection is that a uniform age ignores what different work does to a body. Someone who has laid bricks or nursed patients since sixteen arrives at sixty-five in a very different physical condition from someone who has worked at a desk, and asking both to continue for three further years is asking very different things of them. The unfairness deepens when life expectancy is considered: manual workers on lower incomes tend to die earlier, so they contribute for longer and collect for a shorter period.

A further difficulty is that willingness is not sufficient. Workers over fifty-five who lose a job face substantial hiring discrimination, so raising the pension age without addressing this leaves some people neither employed nor entitled to a pension.

In conclusion, later retirement is fiscally necessary and suits many people well, but applied uniformly it transfers the heaviest burden onto those with the hardest jobs and the shortest lives.

Why this is Band 7.0

  • The essay identifies that occupation determines whether the policy is reasonable, which organises the disadvantages.
  • The life expectancy point adds a dimension most answers miss.
  • Less common lexis used accurately: fiscal, manual, disproportionately, discrimination.
  • A good range of complex structures with only minor slips.

Band 8.5 model answer

438 words

Raising the retirement age is among the few policies that is simultaneously unavoidable and difficult to defend, and the reason is that it is a single instruction issued to people whose working lives have almost nothing in common. Its advantages are real and general; its disadvantages are real and concentrated, which is a much harder combination to manage than a straightforward trade-off.

The case in favour begins with arithmetic. Pension systems were designed when retirement lasted perhaps a decade; life expectancy has since risen by roughly ten years without a matching adjustment, so the same contributions now fund two or three times the payout period. Each extra year of work therefore improves the position twice over — one more year of revenue, one fewer of expenditure — and no other available lever has that property.

There is also a genuine individual argument, which advocates state too rarely because it sounds convenient. Retirement removes income, routine, purpose and most daily social contact at the same moment, and a substantial minority of people experience that as a loss rather than a release. For them, continuing to work is not an imposition but a preference the previous system denied.

The objection that matters is not that people dislike working longer but that identical rules produce unequal sacrifices. Someone who began physical labour at sixteen reaches sixty-five with a body that has absorbed fifty years of it, while someone who entered an office at twenty-three arrives comparatively intact. Healthy life expectancy — as opposed to life expectancy — differs by well over a decade between the richest and poorest groups in many countries, which produces a genuinely regressive outcome: those with the hardest work contribute for the longest and draw a pension for the shortest time, because they die sooner. A uniform increase quietly redistributes from the people who can least afford it.

A second practical objection is that intention does not create employment. Workers over fifty-five who lose a job face significant hiring discrimination, and raising the pension age without addressing that leaves people stranded between employment they cannot obtain and a pension they cannot yet claim — an outcome that saves money precisely by inflicting hardship.

One frequently raised disadvantage should be set aside: the claim that older workers occupy jobs the young need assumes a fixed number of jobs, which economies do not have. Employment is not a cake, and periods of high older-worker participation have not coincided with elevated youth unemployment. The serious objection is distributional rather than competitive — the case for later retirement is strong, and the case for applying it identically to everyone is not.

Why this is Band 8.5

  • Organises both sides around the tension between a single rule and enormously varied circumstances, which produces analysis rather than a list.
  • Combines the physical-capacity and life-expectancy points into a single distributional argument that most answers never reach.
  • Dismisses the lump-of-labour objection explicitly, which demonstrates judgement about which arguments are worth making.
  • Lexis is precise and idiomatic: fiscal sustainability, healthy life expectancy, regressive, lump of labour, uniform, attrition.
  • Wide and flexible structural range including a cleft, inversion and controlled parenthesis; errors are rare and minor.

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Vocabulary for this topic

Word or phraseMeaningUsed in a sentence
fiscal sustainabilitywhether public finances can continue at current levelsLater retirement is defended on grounds of fiscal sustainability.
healthy life expectancyyears lived in good health rather than simply years livedHealthy life expectancy differs by over a decade between income groups.
regressiveplacing a heavier burden on those with lessA uniform increase is regressive towards manual workers.
the lump of labour fallacythe mistaken belief that there is a fixed number of jobsThe claim that older workers block the young is a lump of labour fallacy.
uniform (policy)applied identically to everyoneA uniform retirement age ignores what different work does to a body.
attritiongradual wearing down over timeFifty years of physical attrition is not undone at sixty-five.

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Common questions

Should I mention an argument only to dismiss it?

Yes, when it is one the examiner expects and you have a reason to reject it. Setting aside the "older workers block young people" claim shows you can distinguish strong arguments from popular ones, which is exactly the judgement Band 8 describes.

How do I make a fairness argument rigorous?

Attach it to a measurable difference. "Poorer workers have shorter healthy life expectancy, so they contribute longer and collect for less" is a fairness argument with a mechanism, which is far harder to dismiss than an appeal to unfairness in general.

Can I write about a policy I think is necessary but unfair?

Yes, and it often produces the most convincing essays. Accepting that something is unavoidable while criticising how it is applied gives you a clear position without forcing you into an unrealistic one.