Band 6.0 model answer
250 wordsIn some countries the government has made recycling obligatory, and families must separate paper, glass, plastic and food waste. This decision has advantages, but it also creates difficulties for some people.
The main advantage is environmental. When materials are recycled, factories do not need to produce everything from the beginning, and this saves a large amount of energy and raw materials. Producing aluminium from old cans, for example, uses much less electricity than producing it from the mineral. Recycling also reduces the amount of rubbish in landfills, which pollute the soil and the water.
Another advantage is that a law changes the habits of everybody, not only of people who care about nature. When separation is obligatory, children grow up doing it automatically, and after some years nobody thinks about it, in the same way that people now wear seat belts without thinking.
On the other hand, there are problems. Separating waste needs space and time. A family in a big house has no difficulty, but a person living in a very small flat cannot keep four different containers in the kitchen, and elderly people may find the rules complicated.
In addition, if people put the wrong item in the wrong container, the whole load can be contaminated and sent to the landfill anyway, so all the effort is lost.
In conclusion, compulsory recycling saves resources and creates good habits, but it is more difficult for people in small flats and it only works if everybody follows the rules correctly.
Why this is Band 6.0
- Both sides are covered and the points are relevant, but they are stated rather than developed.
- Cohesion is clear and mechanical.
- Vocabulary is adequate with repetition of recycling, people and rubbish.
- Sentences are largely simple and compound with limited variety.