Advantages and Disadvantages Work and employment Task 2

A growing number of companies allow employees to work from home permanently.

A full IELTS Writing Task 2 answer to this question at Band 6.0, 7.0, 8.5, with a paragraph plan, the vocabulary that fits this topic, and the reasons each answer scores what it does.

The question

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

A growing number of companies allow employees to work from home permanently.

Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

How to read this question

Check the question line: this one asks you to outline both sides, so no verdict is strictly required — but the strongest answers still find an organising idea rather than listing. Here it is that remote work redistributes rather than removes costs: commuting time returns to the employee while office costs, supervision and informal learning shift onto individuals and onto the newest staff.

Paragraph plan

Introduction — Paraphrase, then signpost: gains in time, geography and inclusion; losses concentrated in informal learning and in who absorbs the hidden costs.

Body 1 — Advantages — recovered commuting time, access to jobs regardless of location, and viability for people excluded by fixed office attendance.

Body 2 — Disadvantages — junior staff lose the incidental learning that cannot be scheduled, and home becomes a workplace at the employee's expense.

Conclusion — The effects are unevenly distributed by seniority and by housing, which is what makes a blanket policy difficult.

Model answers

Band 6.0 model answer

262 words

After the pandemic, many companies decided that their staff can work from home permanently. This situation has several advantages, but it also creates some difficulties.

The main advantage is time. An employee who travelled two hours every day now has these two hours for his family, for sport or for sleeping, and he does not spend money on petrol or on train tickets. He is also less tired, so very often he works better.

Another advantage is freedom of location. A person can live in a small town where the flats are cheap and work for a company in the capital, and companies can employ the best specialist from any city. This is also very useful for people with a disability or for mothers with small children, because it is difficult for them to go to an office every day.

On the other hand, there are disadvantages. Young employees learn a lot from their colleagues in the office: they hear how an experienced person speaks with a client and they can ask a small question immediately. At home they are alone, so they learn much more slowly.

In addition, many people feel lonely, and some of them cannot separate work and rest, so they work until late in the evening. Also, the employee pays for the electricity, the heating and a bigger flat with a room for working, and the company saves this money.

In conclusion, working from home saves time and gives freedom, but it makes learning harder for young staff and moves some costs from the company to the employee.

Why this is Band 6.0

  • Both sides are covered with relevant points, but each is stated rather than developed.
  • Cohesion is clear and mechanical.
  • Vocabulary is adequate with repetition of work, home and office.
  • Sentences are largely simple and compound with limited variety.

Band 7.0 model answer

307 words

A growing number of employers now allow staff to work remotely on a permanent basis. The arrangement brings substantial benefits, though its costs are distributed rather unevenly.

The most immediate advantage is the recovery of commuting time. An hour each way is roughly ten working weeks a year returned to the employee, along with the associated expense and fatigue, and there is good evidence that people who sleep more and travel less produce better work rather than merely happier work. Remote arrangements also break the link between where someone lives and where they can be employed, allowing staff to live in cheaper areas while employers recruit from a national rather than a local pool.

There is a strong inclusion argument as well. Fixed office attendance quietly excludes people with mobility limitations, chronic conditions or caring responsibilities that cannot be arranged around a rigid schedule, and removing it makes employment viable for people who were previously shut out of it entirely.

The clearest disadvantage falls on junior employees. A great deal of professional learning is incidental — overhearing how a colleague handles a difficult client, asking a half-formed question because someone happens to be nearby — and none of it survives being converted into a scheduled meeting. Remote work is therefore comfortable for those who already know what they are doing and considerably harder for those who do not.

A second disadvantage is the quiet transfer of costs. Employers save on office space while employees absorb heating, electricity and the need for a home large enough to contain a workspace, which is a meaningful expense for anyone in a small flat and effectively impossible for some.

In conclusion, permanent remote work returns time and widens access, but it disadvantages the least experienced staff and shifts overheads onto individuals — effects that depend heavily on seniority and on housing.

Why this is Band 7.0

  • Points are developed into consequences rather than listed, particularly the effect on junior staff.
  • The essay identifies the cost-transfer to employees, which gives the answer a controlling idea.
  • Less common lexis used accurately: incidental, overheads, autonomy, proximity.
  • A good range of complex structures with only minor slips.

Band 8.5 model answer

436 words

Permanent remote working is usually assessed as a straightforward trade of office life for flexibility. A more accurate description is that it redistributes costs rather than removing them — time returns to the employee, while several expenses and one significant form of learning move onto parties who did not previously bear them. Setting out the advantages and disadvantages this way makes it clear why the same policy is experienced so differently across an organisation.

The gains begin with time, and the quantity is larger than it appears. A daily hour each way amounts to roughly ten working weeks a year, recovered along with the cost and the accumulated fatigue of the journey. More significant in the long run is the severing of employment from geography: staff may live where housing is affordable while employers recruit from a national pool, which benefits precisely those regions that have been exporting their graduates for decades.

The inclusion argument deserves particular weight because it concerns people who were previously excluded outright. Rigid office attendance functions as an unstated eligibility criterion, filtering out those with limited mobility, fluctuating health conditions or caring obligations that cannot be compressed into evenings. For them remote work is not a convenience but the difference between employment and none.

The most serious disadvantage is the loss of tacit knowledge transfer, and it is worth being precise about why it cannot be scheduled. What a junior employee learns by proximity is largely things they did not know to ask about — the tone taken with a difficult client, which corners are never cut, how a senior colleague decides something is finished. This is transmitted through overhearing and interruption, both of which require being present without an agenda. A remote organisation can replace meetings but not ambient exposure, so it tends to work well for people who already have the judgement and poorly for those acquiring it.

The second disadvantage is a straightforward externalisation of overheads. Employers reduce office costs while employees absorb heating, electricity, equipment and, crucially, the requirement for a home containing a workable space — a cost that is trivial for someone with a spare room and prohibitive for someone in a shared flat. There is also the risk of proximity bias, whereby staff who do appear in person receive more attention and advancement, which converts an apparently free choice into a career penalty.

Taken together, the advantages accrue mainly to established employees with adequate housing, while the disadvantages fall on the newest staff and on those with the least space — an asymmetry that explains why a single organisation-wide rule so rarely satisfies anyone.

Why this is Band 8.5

  • Organises the answer around a single idea — costs are redistributed rather than eliminated — which turns a list into an argument.
  • Develops the tacit-learning point through a mechanism, explaining precisely why scheduled contact cannot substitute for proximity.
  • Notes that the benefits and costs fall on different groups, which is a distributional analysis rather than a balance sheet.
  • Lexis is precise and idiomatic: tacit knowledge, overheads, proximity bias, externalised, incidental, asymmetric.
  • Wide structural range used flexibly, with a cleft, fronted concessives and controlled parenthesis; errors are rare and minor.

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Vocabulary for this topic

Word or phraseMeaningUsed in a sentence
tacit knowledgeunderstanding gained by experience that is hard to put into wordsTacit knowledge is transferred by proximity, not by meetings.
overheadsthe ongoing running costs of a businessEmployers reduce overheads while employees absorb them.
to externalise a costto shift an expense onto someone elseHome working externalises heating and space costs onto staff.
proximity biasfavouring employees who are physically presentProximity bias turns a free choice into a career penalty.
incidental (learning)happening as a side effect rather than being plannedIncidental learning does not survive being scheduled.
asymmetricaffecting different groups unequallyThe effects are asymmetric between senior and junior staff.

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Common questions

Do I need an opinion in an advantages and disadvantages essay?

Check the question line, not the statement. "What are the advantages and disadvantages?" asks you to outline both. If it asks whether the advantages outweigh the disadvantages, a verdict becomes compulsory and an even-handed answer cannot exceed Band 6 for Task Response.

How do I avoid writing a list?

Find one idea that organises both sides. Here it is that costs are redistributed rather than removed, so every point becomes an instance of that. An organising idea is what makes the essay read as an argument even when no verdict is required.

Is it worth saying who benefits and who loses?

Yes — distributional analysis is one of the clearest markers of a high band. Noting that gains go to senior staff with spare rooms while costs fall on junior staff in shared flats is far more precise than saying there are pros and cons.