Advantages and Disadvantages Technology Task 2

Artificial intelligence is increasingly used to make decisions about hiring and lending.

A full IELTS Writing Task 2 answer to this question at Band 6.0, 7.0, 8.5, with a paragraph plan, the vocabulary that fits this topic, and the reasons each answer scores what it does.

The question

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Artificial intelligence is increasingly used to make decisions about hiring and lending.

What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

How to read this question

The strongest organising idea is that these systems learn from past decisions, so they inherit whatever bias produced those decisions — but express it consistently and at scale, which makes it simultaneously harder to see and easier to audit than human prejudice. Holding both halves of that paradox is what separates a thoughtful answer from a list of hopes and fears.

Paragraph plan

Introduction — Paraphrase, then signpost: real gains in consistency and access; real risks in inherited bias, opacity and the scale at which errors replicate.

Body 1 — Advantages — decisions become consistent and auditable, and lending can reach people whom conventional credit scoring never assessed at all.

Body 2 — Disadvantages — training data encodes past discrimination, proxies reintroduce protected characteristics, and an unexplainable refusal cannot be appealed.

Conclusion — The technology is neither fair nor unfair inherently; what decides is whether the system can be inspected and challenged.

Model answers

Band 6.0 model answer

274 words

Today many banks and companies use artificial intelligence to decide who will receive a loan or who will be invited to a job interview. This technology has clear advantages, but it also creates serious risks.

The main advantage is speed and consistency. A computer can read ten thousand applications in a few minutes, while a human manager needs several weeks. The machine is also never tired and never in a bad mood, so the applicant who is number five hundred receives the same attention as the first one, which is not true for a tired human being.

Another advantage is that some people receive an opportunity for the first time. Many people have no credit history because they never took a loan, so a normal bank refuses them automatically. A system that looks at other information, for example regular payments for electricity or rent, can see that this person is reliable.

On the other hand, these systems learn from old decisions. If a company employed mostly men for twenty years, the computer learns that successful candidates are men, and it starts to reject women. The machine does not understand that this is discrimination; it only repeats the pattern from the past.

Another problem is that nobody can explain the decision. When a bank refuses a loan, the customer wants to know the reason, but often even the engineers cannot explain exactly why the system said no, so the person cannot correct the mistake or complain.

In conclusion, automatic systems are fast and can help people without a credit history, but they can repeat old discrimination and give decisions that nobody is able to explain.

Why this is Band 6.0

  • Both sides are covered with relevant points, but they are stated rather than developed.
  • Cohesion is clear and mechanical.
  • Vocabulary is adequate with repetition of computer, people and decision.
  • Sentences are largely simple and compound with limited variety.

Band 7.0 model answer

310 words

Automated systems increasingly decide who is shortlisted for a job or approved for credit. The advantages are considerable, but so are the failure modes, and both follow from the same feature: these systems learn from what has been done before.

The first advantage is consistency. Human decisions vary with fatigue, mood and the order in which applications are read, and these variations are invisible and unappealable. An automated system applies the same rule to every case, which means that where it is wrong, it is wrong in a detectable pattern — and a detectable pattern can be measured, challenged and corrected in a way that a thousand individual human judgements cannot.

The second is access. Conventional credit assessment excludes anyone without a borrowing history, which disproportionately affects the young, migrants and people who have simply never needed credit. Systems that assess a wider range of evidence, such as regular rent or utility payments, can identify reliability in people whom traditional scoring would have refused without examination.

The central disadvantage is that training data records past decisions, including discriminatory ones. A model trained on twenty years of hiring at a firm that favoured men will treat maleness as a marker of suitability, and removing the field for sex does not solve it, because other variables act as proxies. Discrimination therefore survives in a form that appears objective and is harder to contest.

A further difficulty is opacity. Complex models often cannot produce a reason for a particular decision, so a rejected applicant has nothing to appeal against and nothing to correct. Errors also replicate at scale: a biased recruiter affects one company, whereas a biased model licensed to hundreds affects an entire sector simultaneously.

In conclusion, these systems offer consistency and can widen access to credit, but they inherit historical bias and produce decisions that are difficult to explain or challenge.

Why this is Band 7.0

  • The essay explains how bias enters through training data rather than asserting that systems are biased.
  • The auditability point is raised, which gives the advantages a dimension beyond speed.
  • Less common lexis used accurately: training data, proxy, opaque, consistency.
  • A good range of complex structures with only minor slips.

Band 8.5 model answer

427 words

Both the promise and the danger of automated hiring and lending come from a single property: these systems learn by finding patterns in decisions that were made before. That is what makes them consistent, and it is also what makes them capable of reproducing the past with perfect fidelity, including the parts of it nobody would defend.

The advantage most worth stating is not speed but consistency, and it has an underrated consequence. Human decisions vary with fatigue, hunger and the order of the pile — variation that is invisible, unrecorded and effectively unchallengeable. An automated system applies the same logic to every applicant, which means its errors form a measurable pattern. Paradoxically, a biased algorithm is easier to prove biased than a biased panel: you can test it on ten thousand synthetic applications and observe exactly what it does, which no employment tribunal can do to a hiring manager's intuition.

The second advantage is genuine expansion of access. Conventional credit scoring cannot assess anyone lacking a borrowing history, so it refuses the young, recent migrants and the financially cautious not because they are risky but because they are unmeasured. Models drawing on rent, utilities and cash-flow patterns can distinguish reliability within that group, extending credit to people a traditional system declined without ever examining them.

The corresponding disadvantage is that the training data is a record of historical behaviour, not of merit. A recruitment model built on two decades of a firm's decisions learns whatever those decisions encoded, and if the firm promoted men, the model treats the correlates of maleness as predictive. Deleting the sex field achieves little, because proxy variables persist — a sport, a school, a career gap, a postcode — and a sufficiently capable model reconstructs the protected characteristic from them without ever being told to.

Opacity then removes the remedy. A rejected applicant told only that a model declined them has nothing specific to contest and nothing to correct, and the ordinary defence against an unfair decision — ask why, demonstrate it is wrong — is unavailable. Scale compounds this decisively: a prejudiced recruiter harms the candidates of one firm, whereas one widely licensed model applies the same misjudgement across an entire industry, so an individual's error becomes a systemic exclusion.

Weighed together, these are not arguments for or against the technology so much as arguments about governance. The same consistency that makes automated bias dangerous is what makes it auditable, and whether these systems widen opportunity or entrench exclusion depends almost entirely on whether anyone is permitted to inspect them.

Why this is Band 8.5

  • Builds both sides from one mechanism — learning from past decisions — which explains the advantages and the risks as consequences of the same property.
  • Makes the paradox explicit: automated bias is harder to see but easier to audit than human bias, which is a genuinely non-obvious observation.
  • Explains the proxy problem, showing why removing a protected characteristic does not remove the discrimination.
  • Lexis is precise and idiomatic: training data, proxy variable, opacity, systemic, auditable, at scale.
  • Wide and flexible structural range including a cleft, inversion and controlled parenthesis; errors are rare and minor.

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Vocabulary for this topic

Word or phraseMeaningUsed in a sentence
training datathe past examples a system learns its patterns fromTraining data records past decisions, including discriminatory ones.
proxy variablea substitute that indirectly reveals a hidden characteristicPostcode can act as a proxy variable for ethnicity.
opacitythe quality of being impossible to see into or explainOpacity removes the applicant's ability to appeal.
auditableable to be inspected and tested systematicallyAn algorithm is auditable in a way that human intuition is not.
systemicaffecting an entire system rather than isolated casesOne licensed model turns individual error into systemic exclusion.
at scaleapplied to very large numbers at onceErrors replicate at scale across an entire sector.

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Common questions

Should I use technical terms for a topic like this?

A few, defined implicitly by how you use them — "training data", "proxy" — help precision. What you should avoid is terminology you cannot explain in the same sentence; Lexical Resource rewards accurate use, not unfamiliar vocabulary on its own.

Is it a strong move to point out a paradox?

Yes, when it is genuine. Noting that algorithmic bias is harder to see but easier to prove than human bias shows you have thought past the obvious position, and it gives your conclusion something substantive to resolve.

Can both sides come from the same cause?

That is often the most elegant structure available. Deriving the advantages and disadvantages from one property — learning from past decisions — makes the essay cohere far better than two unrelated lists, and it demonstrates control of the topic.