Band 6.0 model answer
274 wordsToday many banks and companies use artificial intelligence to decide who will receive a loan or who will be invited to a job interview. This technology has clear advantages, but it also creates serious risks.
The main advantage is speed and consistency. A computer can read ten thousand applications in a few minutes, while a human manager needs several weeks. The machine is also never tired and never in a bad mood, so the applicant who is number five hundred receives the same attention as the first one, which is not true for a tired human being.
Another advantage is that some people receive an opportunity for the first time. Many people have no credit history because they never took a loan, so a normal bank refuses them automatically. A system that looks at other information, for example regular payments for electricity or rent, can see that this person is reliable.
On the other hand, these systems learn from old decisions. If a company employed mostly men for twenty years, the computer learns that successful candidates are men, and it starts to reject women. The machine does not understand that this is discrimination; it only repeats the pattern from the past.
Another problem is that nobody can explain the decision. When a bank refuses a loan, the customer wants to know the reason, but often even the engineers cannot explain exactly why the system said no, so the person cannot correct the mistake or complain.
In conclusion, automatic systems are fast and can help people without a credit history, but they can repeat old discrimination and give decisions that nobody is able to explain.
Why this is Band 6.0
- Both sides are covered with relevant points, but they are stated rather than developed.
- Cohesion is clear and mechanical.
- Vocabulary is adequate with repetition of computer, people and decision.
- Sentences are largely simple and compound with limited variety.