Band 6.0 model answer
254 wordsIn the near future, cars without a driver will probably carry passengers on normal roads. In my opinion, this will be a positive development, although it will also create some problems.
The main advantage is safety. Most accidents happen because of human mistakes: the driver is tired, he looks at his telephone, he drives too fast or he drinks alcohol. A computer never becomes tired and never loses concentration, so the number of accidents and deaths on the roads should become much smaller.
Another benefit is for people who cannot drive. Old people, blind people and people with a disability often cannot leave their home alone, and they depend on their family. With an automatic car, they can go to the hospital or to the shop whenever they want, and this gives them independence.
However, there are also disadvantages. Millions of people work as taxi drivers, bus drivers or lorry drivers, and all of them can lose their job in a few years. It is very difficult for a fifty-year-old lorry driver to find a completely new profession.
In addition, there is a legal question. If an automatic car has an accident, who is guilty: the owner, the company that made the car, or the programmer? Governments must answer this question before these cars appear on the roads.
In conclusion, I believe self-driving vehicles will be positive because they will save many lives and help people who cannot drive, but governments must prepare new laws and help the drivers who will lose their work.
Why this is Band 6.0
- A verdict is given and both sides are covered, but the reasoning is general.
- Cohesion is clear and mechanical.
- Vocabulary is adequate with repetition of cars, drivers and accidents.
- Sentences are mainly simple and compound with some correct complex forms.