Band 6.0 model answer
166 wordsThe table shows how many coffees, teas, pastries and sandwiches a coffee shop in an office building sold in four periods of a normal weekday.
The busiest time was the morning, from 7.30 to 10.30, when the shop sold 700 items. In this period pastries were the most popular with 275, and coffee was very close with 265. Tea was 110 and sandwiches were only 50.
Between 10.30 and 2.30 the shop sold 530 items. In this period sandwiches became the most popular product with 200, because it was lunch time. Coffee was 185, pastries 95 and tea only 50.
The quietest period was 2.30 to 5.30 with only 370 items. In the evening, from 5.30 to 8.30, the number increased again to 465.
In total, coffee was the best product with 795 sales, then pastries with 600, sandwiches with 400 and tea with only 270.
In conclusion, the shop was busiest in the morning and sold more coffee than any other product during the day.
Why this is Band 6.0
- The table is covered accurately, including both sets of totals, which secures Task Achievement at this level.
- The data is reported period by period with little grouping, so the pattern of peak times has to be inferred.
- Vocabulary is adequate but repetitive: sold, number and period recur throughout.
- Sentences are largely simple and compound, with figures presented one per clause.