Band 6.0 model answer
169 wordsThe table gives information about four social and economic indicators in Canada, Japan, Peru and Zaire in 1994, according to the United Nations.
The annual income per person was very different. In Japan it was 15,760 dollars and in Canada 11,100 dollars, but in Peru it was only 160 dollars and in Zaire only 130 dollars.
Life expectancy was also higher in the first two countries. People in Japan lived 78 years and people in Canada 76 years, but in Peru only 51 years and in Zaire only 47 years.
The daily calorie supply was 3,326 in Canada and 2,846 in Japan. In Peru it was 1,927 and in Zaire only 1,749, so it was much lower.
The adult literacy rate was 99 per cent in both Canada and Japan. In Peru it was 68 per cent and in Zaire only 34 per cent, which was the lowest number in the table.
In conclusion, Canada and Japan had much better indicators than Peru and Zaire in all four categories.
Why this is Band 6.0
- All four indicators are covered for all four countries with accurate figures, which secures Task Achievement at this level.
- The table is read row by row, so the grouping of the countries is stated only at the end.
- Vocabulary is adequate but repetitive: higher, lower and country recur throughout.
- Sentences are mainly simple and compound, with figures presented one per clause.