Advantages and Disadvantages Education Task 2

Some countries require every school student to learn a second language from the age of six.

A full IELTS Writing Task 2 answer to this question at Band 6.0, 7.0, 8.5, with a paragraph plan, the vocabulary that fits this topic, and the reasons each answer scores what it does.

The question

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Some countries require every school student to learn a second language from the age of six.

Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

How to read this question

The strongest answers separate two claims that are usually merged: that young children acquire languages more easily, and that starting early therefore produces better results. The first is broadly true of pronunciation; the second depends entirely on how much exposure follows, and two hours a week for twelve years produces very little. Making that distinction gives the essay something precise to argue.

Paragraph plan

Introduction — Paraphrase, then signpost: real advantages in pronunciation and in attitude, but the benefit depends on intensity, and there is a genuine opportunity cost.

Body 1 — Advantages — younger learners achieve native-like pronunciation, treat bilingualism as normal, and gain cognitive flexibility.

Body 2 — Disadvantages — thin weekly exposure produces almost nothing, the curriculum time comes from somewhere, and compulsion at six ignores which language will actually be useful.

Conclusion — The age is not the variable that matters; intensity is, and a compulsory low-intensity start may discredit the subject.

Model answers

Band 6.0 model answer

255 words

In some countries every child must start learning a foreign language at six years old. This decision has advantages, but it also creates some difficulties.

The main advantage is that small children learn languages more easily. Their brain is very flexible, and they copy sounds without difficulty, so they can speak with a good accent, while an adult who starts at thirty always keeps a strong accent. Children also are not afraid of making mistakes: a small child speaks and laughs, but a teenager is shy and stays silent.

Another advantage is that knowing another language is useful for the future. Children who speak English can study at a foreign university, find a better job, watch films and travel without problems. Some researchers also say that bilingual people concentrate better and can do two tasks at the same time.

On the other hand, the school day is not longer, so if we add a foreign language, we must reduce another subject, maybe reading, mathematics or sport. For a child who still cannot read well in his own language, this is a serious problem.

In addition, two lessons a week for many years give a very small result. Many students finish school after ten years of English and still cannot have a simple conversation, because forty minutes twice a week is not enough.

In conclusion, starting a language at six gives a better accent and more confidence, but it takes time from other subjects and gives poor results if the number of lessons is too small.

Why this is Band 6.0

  • Both sides are covered with relevant points, but they are stated rather than developed.
  • Cohesion is clear and mechanical.
  • Vocabulary is adequate with repetition of children, language and school.
  • Sentences are largely simple and compound with limited variety.

Band 7.0 model answer

274 words

Some education systems now require every child to begin a second language at six. The case for early exposure is real, but its benefits depend on a condition that compulsory schemes frequently fail to meet.

The clearest advantage concerns pronunciation. Young children discriminate and reproduce unfamiliar sounds far more readily than adolescents or adults, and this capacity declines steadily with age, so a native-like accent is realistically achievable only if exposure begins early. Younger learners are also unselfconscious in a way that matters pedagogically: a six-year-old will attempt a sentence and be corrected without embarrassment, whereas a fifteen-year-old often prefers silence to error.

There are broader benefits too. Children who grow up treating another language as ordinary are more likely to continue and more comfortable with unfamiliar cultures, and there is reasonable evidence that managing two language systems develops flexibility in switching between tasks.

The main disadvantage is that early start is not the same as effective learning. Two forty-minute lessons a week for a decade produce very little, as the large numbers of school-leavers who cannot hold a basic conversation after years of instruction demonstrate. Intensity, not age, determines the outcome, and compulsory programmes tend to deliver breadth of coverage rather than depth.

There is also an opportunity cost. The school day is fixed, so time given to a second language is taken from literacy, mathematics or physical activity, which matters most for children who are already struggling with reading in their first language.

In conclusion, an early start genuinely helps pronunciation and attitude, but unless it is accompanied by substantial exposure it consumes curriculum time for a result that rarely justifies it.

Why this is Band 7.0

  • The essay separates the age advantage from the exposure requirement, which is the key distinction on this topic.
  • The opportunity cost is acknowledged specifically rather than in general.
  • Less common lexis used accurately: acquisition, exposure, curriculum, intensity.
  • A good range of complex structures with only minor slips.

Band 8.5 model answer

454 words

Two claims are usually merged in this debate and deserve separating. The first is that young children acquire language more readily than older learners; the second is that beginning early therefore produces better outcomes. The first is well supported for pronunciation. The second depends entirely on what follows the start, and it is where compulsory programmes most often fail.

The genuine advantage of an early start is phonological. The ability to perceive and reproduce sound contrasts absent from one's first language declines through childhood, so a native-like accent is realistically attainable only for those exposed young. Alongside this sits an attitudinal benefit that is easy to underrate: a six-year-old attempts sentences and accepts correction without embarrassment, whereas an adolescent frequently chooses silence over the risk of sounding foolish — and silence is fatal to language learning. Growing up treating another language as unremarkable also shapes a child's sense of what is possible for them.

The problem is that the age advantage is conditional on intensity, and compulsory schemes rarely supply it. Two short lessons a week for a decade — the standard configuration — amounts to a few hundred hours spread so thinly that most of each week is spent recovering what was forgotten since the last. The evidence is visible in every country operating such a system: large cohorts complete ten years of instruction unable to sustain a simple conversation. Starting at six rather than eleven changes very little if the weekly dose remains the same, because it is exposure, not age, that is doing the work.

This produces a consequence that receives almost no attention. A child who spends a decade being formally taught a language and cannot speak it does not conclude that the programme was under-resourced; they conclude that they are not good at languages. A compulsory low-intensity scheme therefore risks teaching a generation something false about their own capabilities, which is worse than teaching them nothing.

Two further disadvantages are worth noting. The school day is fixed, so the time comes from literacy, mathematics or physical activity — a real cost, particularly for children not yet secure in reading their first language. And compulsion at six requires choosing the language for a child whose future needs are unknowable; systems mandating one language at that age frequently discover a decade later that a different one would have served better.

On balance, then, the advantages are real but narrower than usually claimed, and they are contingent on a level of provision most compulsory programmes do not fund. The variable that determines success is intensity rather than starting age, which suggests that a later, more concentrated programme would deliver more than an early, thin one — while costing considerably less curriculum time.

Why this is Band 8.5

  • Distinguishes the age effect from the exposure requirement and shows that conflating them is what makes compulsory schemes disappointing.
  • Identifies a consequence most answers never consider: a low-intensity compulsory start can teach children they are bad at languages.
  • Handles the choice-of-language problem, which is a real issue with compulsion at six.
  • Lexis is precise and idiomatic: phonological, critical period, intensity, opportunity cost, diminishing, self-concept.
  • Wide and flexible structural range including a cleft, inversion and controlled parenthesis; errors are rare and minor.

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Vocabulary for this topic

Word or phraseMeaningUsed in a sentence
phonologicalrelating to the sounds of a languageThe clearest advantage of an early start is phonological.
critical periodan age window when learning is unusually easyPronunciation is subject to something like a critical period.
intensity (of exposure)how concentrated the contact with a language isIntensity, not starting age, determines the outcome.
opportunity costwhat is given up to make room for something elseThe opportunity cost is time taken from literacy.
self-concepta person's belief about their own abilitiesYears of failure damage a child's self-concept as a learner.
cohorta group progressing through a system togetherWhole cohorts finish school unable to hold a conversation.

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Common questions

How do I challenge a claim that seems obviously true?

Split it into its parts. "Children learn languages easily" and "starting early produces better results" look like one claim but are two, and only the first is well supported. Separating merged claims is one of the most reliable ways to produce a distinctive argument.

Is it acceptable to say a policy could do harm rather than just fail?

Yes, if you can show the mechanism. Explaining that repeated failure teaches children they are bad at languages is a specific harm, not a rhetorical flourish, and it demonstrates the kind of extension examiners look for.

Should I mention which language should be taught?

Briefly, as a genuine complication of compulsion at six. Choosing for a child whose future is unknown is a real drawback of mandating it so early — but keep it to a sentence or two so it supports the argument rather than replacing it.