Advantages and Disadvantages Work and employment Task 2

Some companies have moved to a four-day working week on full pay.

A full IELTS Writing Task 2 answer to this question at Band 6.0, 7.0, 8.5, with a paragraph plan, the vocabulary that fits this topic, and the reasons each answer scores what it does.

The question

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Some companies have moved to a four-day working week on full pay.

What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

How to read this question

The useful observation is that a four-day week on full pay only works if the lost day was not producing much — which is true of a great deal of office work and false of most work where output is tied to hours present. That single condition explains why trial results look impressive in some sectors and impossible in others, and it turns a list of hopes and doubts into an argument about where the policy applies.

Paragraph plan

Introduction — Paraphrase, then signpost: substantial gains where output is not hours-bound; real problems in sectors where it is, and a risk of compression rather than reduction.

Body 1 — Advantages — recovered rest improves the quality of remaining hours, recruitment and retention improve, and meeting-heavy work has obvious slack.

Body 2 — Disadvantages — it cannot transfer to care, retail or manufacturing, and work may simply be compressed into four longer days.

Conclusion — Genuine where output is measured by results; a fairness problem where it can only apply to some.

Model answers

Band 6.0 model answer

251 words

Some companies have decided that their employees will work only four days a week but receive the same salary. This idea has clear advantages, but there are also problems.

The main advantage is rest. A person who has three free days can sleep properly, spend time with his children and do sport, so he returns to the office on Monday with much more energy. Many companies which tried this system reported that the employees did the same amount of work in four days, because they were less tired and they wasted less time.

Another advantage is that it is easier to find good workers. If two companies offer the same salary but one offers a free Friday, everybody chooses the second one. Employees also stay longer in this company, so the company saves money on training new staff.

On the other hand, this system does not work everywhere. A hospital needs nurses seven days a week, and a factory machine must produce every day. In these places, the company must employ more people to cover the fifth day, and this is very expensive.

In addition, sometimes the work is not reduced, only compressed. If an employee must finish the same tasks in four days, he works ten or eleven hours each day and comes home exhausted, so the benefit disappears.

In conclusion, a four-day week gives employees more rest and helps companies attract good staff, but it is impossible in some sectors and it can simply make the working days longer.

Why this is Band 6.0

  • Both sides are covered with relevant points, but they are stated rather than developed.
  • Cohesion is clear and mechanical.
  • Vocabulary is adequate with repetition of work, days and company.
  • Sentences are largely simple and compound with limited variety.

Band 7.0 model answer

284 words

A number of employers have adopted a four-day week without reducing pay. The results reported have been encouraging, though they depend heavily on the kind of work involved.

The strongest advantage is that rest improves the quality of the hours worked. Concentration is finite, and a substantial portion of a conventional week is consumed by meetings that exist because time was available and by tasks performed slowly because there was no reason to hurry. Where output depends on judgement rather than on presence, removing a day frequently removes the least productive one, and trials have repeatedly found output maintained rather than reduced.

The second advantage is in recruitment and retention. An extra free day is a benefit competitors find difficult to match without matching the policy itself, and it is particularly valuable to employees with caring responsibilities. Lower turnover then saves recruitment and training costs that rarely appear in discussions of what the policy costs.

The principal disadvantage is that it cannot be applied everywhere. Hospitals, care homes, transport and retail require coverage across the week, so the only way to shorten individual hours is to employ more people — a genuine cost rather than an efficiency gain. Manufacturing tied to continuous processes faces the same constraint.

A further risk is compression rather than reduction. If the same workload is simply redistributed into four days, employees work ten-hour days and arrive at the third day off already exhausted, which delivers none of the recovery the policy was intended to produce.

In conclusion, a four-day week works well where output is measured by results rather than by hours, but it is difficult to extend to essential services and risks lengthening days rather than shortening weeks.

Why this is Band 7.0

  • The essay identifies the condition under which the policy works — output not tied to hours — which organises both sides.
  • The compression risk is developed rather than mentioned.
  • Less common lexis used accurately: productivity, retention, compression, coverage.
  • A good range of complex structures with only minor slips.

Band 8.5 model answer

446 words

The four-day week on full pay appears to promise something impossible — the same output from fewer hours — and the reason it is not impossible tells you exactly where it works. In a great deal of professional work, output is not proportional to hours present; a significant share of the week is absorbed by meetings that exist because time existed to fill, and by tasks expanding to occupy the space allotted. Remove a day and much of what disappears was never producing anything. Where that slack exists the policy is close to free; where it does not, it is simply a pay rise for less work.

The clearest advantage follows from this. Attention is a finite resource, and rested employees do better work in the hours they are present, so organisations trialling shorter weeks have repeatedly reported output maintained rather than reduced. There is a secondary effect too: a compressed week forces genuine prioritisation, and meetings that survive that scrutiny tend to be the ones worth holding.

Recruitment and retention supply a second, more measurable benefit. An additional free day is difficult for a competitor to match without adopting the policy outright, and it is disproportionately valuable to employees with caring responsibilities — many of whom would otherwise have reduced their hours and their pay. Lower turnover then avoids recruitment and training costs that are rarely counted when the policy's expense is estimated.

The decisive disadvantage is that the enabling condition is absent across much of the economy. In nursing, care work, transport, retail and continuous manufacturing, output is directly hours-bound: a ward cannot be covered by a better-rested nurse who is not there. Shortening individual weeks in those sectors requires hiring proportionally more staff, which is a straightforward cost — and, given existing shortages in exactly those occupations, frequently not achievable at any price.

This produces the objection I find most serious. If the policy spreads only where it is cheap, it will accrue to office workers who are already comparatively well paid and already have some control over their time, while nurses and shop workers continue on five days. A reform that improves conditions for the advantaged and cannot reach the rest is not neutral in its effects, whatever its intentions.

Finally, the compression risk deserves stating as a design failure rather than an inevitability. Where the same workload is simply redistributed into four ten-hour days, employees reach the extra day too depleted to use it, and the recovery the policy exists to deliver never occurs. That outcome is common, but it reflects organisations adopting the schedule without doing the harder work of removing tasks — which was the actual mechanism all along.

Why this is Band 8.5

  • Identifies the precise condition for success and uses it to explain both the encouraging trial results and the sectors where the policy cannot apply.
  • Raises the fairness problem — that the benefit accrues to the already-advantaged — which is the most serious objection and one most answers omit.
  • Distinguishes reduction from compression as a design failure rather than an inevitability.
  • Lexis is precise and idiomatic: hours-bound, slack, coverage, compression, retention, selection effect.
  • Wide structural range used flexibly, with a cleft, fronted concessives and controlled parenthesis; errors are rare and minor.

Model answers written and reviewed by The English All-in-One IELTS team. They are teaching models showing what each band looks like, not real candidate scripts.

This is an advantages and disadvantages question. The answers above show you what each band looks like when it is finished. What they cannot show you is how to get there from a blank page in forty minutes.

That is what our Writing Study Library is for: the structure we teach for this exact question type, the paragraph pattern that goes with it, and the sentence openers for each stage — so the essay is planned before you start writing rather than assembled as you go.

See the structure for this question type →

Vocabulary for this topic

Word or phraseMeaningUsed in a sentence
hours-boundwhere output depends directly on time presentCare work is hours-bound in a way that office work is not.
slackunproductive time within a systemThe policy works where there is slack to remove.
coveragehaving enough staff present at all required timesHospitals need coverage seven days a week.
compressionfitting the same work into fewer, longer daysCompression delivers none of the intended recovery.
retentionkeeping existing employees rather than losing themRetention improves, which saves recruitment costs.
prioritisationdeciding what matters most and dropping the restA shorter week forces genuine prioritisation.

Write your own answer

Draft your response below, then get it marked against all four IELTS criteria. Your draft stays in this browser — nothing is published.

Common questions

How do I explain why something works in one sector but not another?

Name the condition it depends on. Here it is whether output is tied to hours present. Once you state that, the sectoral differences follow automatically and the essay reads as analysis rather than as a list of exceptions.

Should I raise a fairness objection even if it is not obvious?

Yes — a non-obvious objection is often the most valuable thing in an essay. Noting that the benefit reaches office workers and not nurses shows you have thought about consequences rather than repeating the standard debate.

Can I criticise how something is implemented rather than the idea?

Yes, and be explicit that this is what you are doing. Calling compression a design failure rather than a flaw in the concept is a precise distinction, and precision of that kind is what Band 8 rewards.