Band 6.0 model answer
236 wordsSome cities have decided that buses and trams are free for all their residents. This decision has important advantages, but it also creates several problems.
The first advantage is help for poor families. A person with a small salary can spend a large part of his money on transport every month, and if the ticket is free, this money stays in the family. Some unemployed people also refuse a job in another part of the city because the transport is too expensive, so free travel helps them to find work.
Another advantage is for the environment. If travelling by bus costs nothing, some drivers will leave their car at home, so there will be less traffic and cleaner air in the centre of the city.
On the other hand, the city loses the money from tickets, and this money paid for drivers, fuel and repairs. The government must find this money from taxes, or the quality of the service will become worse: old buses, fewer buses and long waiting.
In addition, when transport is free, more people use it, so the buses become very crowded. Some passengers who paid before now prefer to take their car again because they cannot find a place to sit.
In conclusion, free public transport helps people with low incomes and can reduce pollution, but the city must pay for it, and without enough money the service becomes crowded and unreliable.
Why this is Band 6.0
- Both sides are covered with relevant points, but they are stated rather than developed.
- Cohesion is clear and mechanical.
- Vocabulary is adequate with repetition of transport, people and free.
- Sentences are largely simple and compound with limited variety.