Discussion (Discuss both views) Globalisation Task 2

Some people believe that global companies bring prosperity to developing countries. Others think they mainly serve their own interests.

A full IELTS Writing Task 2 answer to this question at Band 6.0, 7.0, 8.5, with a paragraph plan, the vocabulary that fits this topic, and the reasons each answer scores what it does.

The question

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Some people believe that global companies bring prosperity to developing countries. Others think they mainly serve their own interests.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

How to read this question

The standard essay on this topic argues that multinationals pay badly. The stronger question is: badly compared with what? Wages that look exploitative by rich-country standards are often the best locally available, which is why the jobs are competed for. Facing that honestly — and then asking why the local alternatives are so poor — produces a far better answer than either indignation or defence.

Paragraph plan

Introduction — Paraphrase both views, then state a position: the effect depends on whether skills and bargaining power transfer, which is set by the host state's terms.

Body 1 — The prosperity case — capital, employment and technology transfer, judged against the realistic local alternative rather than against rich-country wages.

Body 2 — The exploitation case — mobility gives the firm permanent leverage, and countries compete by lowering standards.

Conclusion — Neither is automatic; outcomes track the terms the host government is able to impose.

Model answers

Band 6.0 model answer

223 words

Large international companies open factories and offices in poorer countries. Some people think this helps these countries to develop, and others believe the companies only want cheap workers. In my opinion, the result depends on the rules of the host government.

On the one hand, these companies bring many benefits. They create thousands of jobs in places where there is high unemployment, and workers receive a regular salary for the first time. The company also brings modern technology and training, so local employees learn new skills which they can use later in their own business. In addition, the government collects taxes from the company and can build roads, schools and hospitals with this money.

On the other hand, there are serious problems. The salaries are often very low compared with the salaries in the rich country, and the working conditions are sometimes dangerous. Also, most of the profit does not stay in the poor country; it goes back to the head office abroad. If the government tries to increase the minimum wage, the company can simply move the factory to another country.

In conclusion, I think global companies can bring prosperity, but only if the government is strong enough to protect its workers and to make the company pay fair taxes. Without these rules, the country gives cheap labour and receives very little.

Why this is Band 6.0

  • Both views are covered and an opinion is given, but the argument is asserted rather than examined — the essay says wages are low without a comparison.
  • Cohesion is clear and mechanical, with the position reserved for the conclusion.
  • Vocabulary is adequate with repetition of companies, workers and countries.
  • Sentences are largely simple and compound with some correct complex clauses.

Band 7.0 model answer

279 words

Whether multinational corporations enrich developing economies or simply extract cheap labour from them is a long-standing dispute. My view is that both outcomes occur, and that the difference is determined by the terms a host government is capable of imposing.

The case for prosperity requires an honest comparison. Wages paid by foreign firms often look indefensible from a wealthy country, but the relevant question is what the same worker's alternative actually is — frequently subsistence agriculture or informal work with no wage at all, which is why such jobs are heavily competed for. Beyond employment, these companies bring capital that local markets cannot supply, along with production methods, quality standards and management practices that spread outwards as trained staff leave to work elsewhere or start their own firms. That diffusion of capability, rather than the wages themselves, is the strongest argument in their favour.

The opposing case is not really about pay levels either; it is about power. A multinational can relocate and a country cannot, so the threat of departure sits behind every negotiation over wages, safety or environmental rules. This produces competition between poor countries to offer the lowest standards, and the resulting arrangements are often locked in by tax agreements that allow profits to be repatriated with very little retained locally. Where a government is weak or dependent on a single investor, the relationship is genuinely extractive: the country supplies labour and land while the returns accumulate abroad.

In conclusion, neither outcome is automatic. Countries that negotiated conditions on technology transfer, local hiring and taxation have generally grown wealthier through foreign investment; those that competed purely on cheapness have generally remained poor while employing many people.

Why this is Band 7.0

  • The essay makes the comparison explicit — wages judged against local alternatives, not against rich-country pay — which is the point most answers miss.
  • The exploitation case is grounded in mobility and bargaining power rather than in moral condemnation.
  • Less common lexis used accurately: multinational, leverage, repatriated, regulatory.
  • Varied structures with good control; occasional awkwardness but nothing that impedes meaning.

Band 8.5 model answer

428 words

Arguments about multinational corporations in developing economies usually founder on a missing comparison. Calling a wage exploitative requires an answer to the question compared with what, and the honest counterfactual is rarely a better job in the same country — it is subsistence farming, informal work, or nothing. That is why these positions are competed for rather than resisted, and any argument that cannot accommodate the fact is arguing with the workers as well as the firm. My position is that neither prosperity nor exploitation is inherent, and that the variable which decides is bargaining power.

The developmental case rests less on wages than on diffusion. Foreign firms bring capital that domestic markets cannot assemble, together with production standards, logistics and management practice that local economies have no other route to acquiring. The value of this arrives indirectly: employees leave, start suppliers, train others, and the capability spreads well beyond the original factory. The economies that have escaped poverty in living memory did so largely through this channel, and it is worth stating plainly because the alternative — remaining outside global production entirely — has an unimpressive record.

The exploitation case is strongest when it is not about pay at all but about mobility. A corporation can relocate within a year; a country cannot move, and its workers cannot follow. That asymmetry sits behind every negotiation over safety, wages and environmental limits, and it produces regulatory arbitrage — governments competing to offer the fewest obligations, since the alternative is watching investment go to the neighbour who offers less. The result is a genuine race to the bottom in which no individual government is behaving irrationally.

Where this ends badly, the failure is visible in structure rather than in wage levels. An enclave operation imports its own inputs, employs locals only at the lowest grades, repatriates its profits under a favourable tax agreement, and leaves nothing behind when costs rise — the country has rented out its labour and acquired no capability. Where it ends well, the host state has attached conditions: local sourcing, training obligations, technology transfer, and taxation actually collected.

What follows is that the debate is misframed as a question about corporate character. Firms pursue advantage wherever they operate, in rich countries as much as poor ones; the difference is that wealthy states possess the regulatory strength to convert that pursuit into domestic benefit. The determining factor is therefore the capacity of the host government to set terms — which is why the same company produces development in one country and an enclave in another.

Why this is Band 8.5

  • Confronts the comparison problem directly — exploitative relative to what? — which reframes the whole debate and is the single most useful idea available on this topic.
  • Locates the real asymmetry in mobility rather than in wages, then shows how that produces a race to the bottom between states.
  • The conclusion identifies the variable that predicts outcomes, giving a position that is decisive without being simplistic.
  • Lexis is precise and idiomatic: subsistence, diffusion, regulatory arbitrage, repatriate, enclave, counterfactual.
  • Wide structural range used flexibly, with a cleft, fronted concessives and controlled parenthesis; errors are rare and minor.

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Vocabulary for this topic

Word or phraseMeaningUsed in a sentence
counterfactualwhat would have happened otherwiseThe relevant counterfactual is subsistence farming, not a better job.
subsistenceproducing only enough to survive onThe alternative for many workers is subsistence agriculture.
diffusionthe spread of skills or technology through an economyThe main benefit is diffusion of capability, not wages.
regulatory arbitragemoving operations to wherever the rules are weakestMobility allows regulatory arbitrage between poor countries.
to repatriate profitsto send earnings back to the parent company's home countryProfits are repatriated with little retained locally.
enclavean isolated operation with no links to the surrounding economyAn enclave factory imports everything and leaves nothing behind.

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Common questions

Is it risky to defend multinational companies?

No. Examiners have no preferred view and mark only how well the argument is made. What is risky is an unexamined position of either kind — indignation with no comparison, or defence with no acknowledgement of power. Both read as thin regardless of which side they take.

How do I strengthen a moral argument?

Attach it to a mechanism. "Wages are unfair" is an assertion; "the firm can relocate and the country cannot, so every negotiation is asymmetric" is an argument. The moral point lands harder once you have shown what produces the outcome.

Should I name specific companies or countries?

It is rarely necessary and often costly. A described structure — an operation that imports its inputs and employs locals only at the lowest grades — makes the point precisely without requiring facts you would have to defend.