Band 6.0 model answer
223 wordsLarge international companies open factories and offices in poorer countries. Some people think this helps these countries to develop, and others believe the companies only want cheap workers. In my opinion, the result depends on the rules of the host government.
On the one hand, these companies bring many benefits. They create thousands of jobs in places where there is high unemployment, and workers receive a regular salary for the first time. The company also brings modern technology and training, so local employees learn new skills which they can use later in their own business. In addition, the government collects taxes from the company and can build roads, schools and hospitals with this money.
On the other hand, there are serious problems. The salaries are often very low compared with the salaries in the rich country, and the working conditions are sometimes dangerous. Also, most of the profit does not stay in the poor country; it goes back to the head office abroad. If the government tries to increase the minimum wage, the company can simply move the factory to another country.
In conclusion, I think global companies can bring prosperity, but only if the government is strong enough to protect its workers and to make the company pay fair taxes. Without these rules, the country gives cheap labour and receives very little.
Why this is Band 6.0
- Both views are covered and an opinion is given, but the argument is asserted rather than examined — the essay says wages are low without a comparison.
- Cohesion is clear and mechanical, with the position reserved for the conclusion.
- Vocabulary is adequate with repetition of companies, workers and countries.
- Sentences are largely simple and compound with some correct complex clauses.