Discussion (Discuss both views) Education Task 2

Some people believe that children learn best when lessons are strictly structured by the teacher. Others think children should be free to choose what and how they study.

A full IELTS Writing Task 2 answer to this question at Band 6.0, 7.0, 8.5, with a paragraph plan, the vocabulary that fits this topic, and the reasons each answer scores what it does.

The question

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Some people believe that children learn best when lessons are strictly structured by the teacher. Others think children should be free to choose what and how they study.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

How to read this question

A discussion question has three obligations, not two: both views, and your own. The single most common reason a competent essay scores 6 here is that the writer discusses both sides fairly and never says what they think — or only reveals it in the last line. State your position in the introduction and the essay organises itself. Note also that "learn best" invites the question <em>best at what</em>, which is where a Band 8 answer finds its argument.

Paragraph plan

Introduction — Paraphrase both views, then state a position: structure and autonomy suit different stages and different goals, so the question is one of sequence, not of choosing a side.

Body 1 — The case for teacher-led structure — novices lack the knowledge to know what they need next.

Body 2 — The case for autonomy — motivation and the ability to direct your own learning are themselves outcomes, and they are only built by practising them.

Conclusion — Structure first, autonomy progressively — the two are stages, not rivals.

Model answers

Band 6.0 model answer

214 words

People have different ideas about the best way for children to study. Some think that the teacher must control everything in the lesson, and others think that children should decide what they want to learn. In my opinion, both methods are useful in different situations.

On the one hand, a structured lesson has many advantages. Children are young and they do not know which subjects are important for their future. The teacher is an adult with experience, so he or she can build the lessons step by step, from easy to difficult. Also, in a controlled class there is more discipline, and children who are lazy still have to work. Without this system, some students will only play and learn nothing.

On the other hand, freedom also helps children. When a child chooses a topic that he likes, he studies it with pleasure and he remembers it better. This method also teaches children to be independent and to make their own decisions, which is a very important skill for adult life.

In my opinion, small children need a strict structure because they cannot organise themselves, but older students should have more freedom. In conclusion, the best solution is to combine the two methods and to give more choice to children when they grow up.

Why this is Band 6.0

  • Both views are covered and an opinion is given, which satisfies the task, but the discussion of each side is short and the opinion arrives mostly in the conclusion.
  • Cohesion is clear and mechanical: On the one hand, On the other hand, In my opinion.
  • Vocabulary is adequate for the topic with repetition of children, teacher and study.
  • Grammar is largely accurate but the sentence patterns repeat.

Band 7.0 model answer

269 words

Opinion is divided on whether children learn better in lessons tightly directed by a teacher or when they are free to pursue their own interests. In my view the two are not genuine alternatives: structure is what makes autonomy possible, and the disagreement is really about when to move from one to the other.

The argument for teacher-led lessons rests on a fact about beginners that is easy to overlook. A learner who knows very little about a subject is not well placed to judge what they should study next, because recognising the gap requires the knowledge they do not yet have. This is why carefully sequenced instruction works: it puts ideas in an order the learner could not have designed. Structure also protects children who are not naturally confident, since an open classroom quietly rewards those who already know how to organise themselves.

The case for freedom, however, is about a different outcome. Interest is not a pleasant extra; it determines how much attention a child gives and therefore how much is retained, and intrinsic motivation is far stronger when the topic was chosen rather than assigned. More importantly, the ability to direct your own learning is itself something schools are meant to produce, and it cannot be taught by description. A student who has never chosen anything for twelve years arrives at university unable to work independently.

I therefore believe that the choice should be sequenced rather than settled. Younger children need structure because it is the prerequisite for everything else, and independence should be handed over gradually as they acquire enough knowledge to use it well.

Why this is Band 7.0

  • The position is stated in the introduction and then argued for, rather than being saved for the conclusion — the main thing separating a 7 from a 6 on discussion questions.
  • Each view is given a genuine reason, not just a description: novices cannot evaluate what they do not yet know.
  • Less common lexis used accurately: autonomy, sequenced, prerequisite, intrinsic.
  • Varied structures with good control; occasional awkwardness but nothing that impedes meaning.

Band 8.5 model answer

388 words

The disagreement between structured teaching and child-led learning is usually presented as a dispute about method, but it is better understood as a dispute about what school is for. Each side is optimising for a different outcome, and once that is made explicit the opposition largely dissolves. My own position is that structure and autonomy belong in sequence rather than in competition, and that treating them as rivals is a false dichotomy that has done a good deal of damage in both directions.

The case for teacher-led instruction is stronger than its critics allow, and it rests on a genuine asymmetry. A novice cannot reliably identify what they should learn next, because the judgement requires exactly the knowledge they lack; interest, left to itself, tends to circle what is already familiar. Sequenced teaching supplies an order the learner could not have constructed, and the scaffolding it provides is what allows a child to attempt something slightly beyond their current reach. There is also a quieter equity argument: an unstructured classroom tacitly rewards children who arrive already knowing how to organise themselves, which usually means children whose families taught them.

The opposing view is answering a different question. Its concern is not efficiency of transmission but whether the child ends up able to learn without a teacher present — and self-regulation, unlike multiplication, cannot be transmitted by explanation. It is acquired only by being exercised, which means a curriculum that never allows a choice cannot produce it, however well the content is delivered. Motivation compounds the point: attention is the scarce resource in any classroom, and a child pursuing a question they actually care about supplies it for free.

Seen together, the two positions are describing different phases of the same process. Autonomy exercised without knowledge is not freedom but drift, and knowledge accumulated without autonomy leaves a student who performs well until nobody is directing them. What matters is the rate of transfer — how quickly responsibility is handed over as competence grows — not which pole to stand at.

My conclusion, then, is that structure should be front-loaded and deliberately surrendered. The failure mode of traditional schooling is holding on too long; the failure mode of child-led education is letting go before there is anything to let go of. Neither is an argument for the other extreme.

Why this is Band 8.5

  • Answers the question behind the question — best at what? — and uses it to show that the two views are optimising for different outcomes rather than disagreeing about one.
  • Both views are argued at their strongest before being reconciled, which is the mark of a genuine discussion rather than a balanced-sounding list.
  • The position is present from the first paragraph, developed throughout, and sharpened rather than repeated at the end.
  • Lexis is precise and idiomatic: scaffolding, self-regulation, front-loaded, a false dichotomy, tacitly.
  • Wide structural range used flexibly, including a cleft, fronted concessives and controlled parenthesis; errors are rare and minor.

Model answers written and reviewed by The English All-in-One IELTS team. They are teaching models showing what each band looks like, not real candidate scripts.

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Vocabulary for this topic

Word or phraseMeaningUsed in a sentence
autonomythe ability and freedom to make your own decisionsAutonomy has to be built gradually rather than granted all at once.
scaffoldingtemporary support that lets a learner do something they could not do aloneStructured teaching provides the scaffolding for harder work later.
self-regulationthe ability to manage and direct your own learning or behaviourSelf-regulation is acquired by practising it, not by being told about it.
intrinsic motivationwanting to do something for its own sake rather than for a rewardIntrinsic motivation is far stronger when the topic was chosen.
prerequisitesomething that must exist first before something else is possibleKnowledge is a prerequisite for using freedom well.
a false dichotomypresenting two options as the only choices when they are not opposedStructure versus freedom is a false dichotomy.
to front-loadto concentrate something at the beginning of a processStructure should be front-loaded and then reduced.
asymmetryan imbalance between two sidesThere is an asymmetry between what a novice knows and what they need to choose.

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Common questions

Where should my opinion go in a discussion essay?

In the introduction, and again in the conclusion. Saving it for the end is the most common reason a well-written discussion essay scores 6 for Task Response: the examiner has read three quarters of the answer without knowing what you think. Stating it early also makes the body paragraphs easier to organise.

Do I have to give both views equal space?

Roughly equal, yes. The task says discuss both, so a paragraph on one view and two sentences on the other is an incomplete response — even if you disagree with that view. Argue the side you reject at its strongest; it makes your own position more convincing.

Can my opinion be that both views are right?

Yes, but only if you say in what respect. "Both are right" on its own reads as avoidance. "Both are right about different stages" or "about different outcomes" is a real position, and it gives your conclusion something to do.

Is a fourth or fifth paragraph worth it here?

Only if it carries a distinct step. In the Band 8.5 model the fourth paragraph reconciles the two views, which is a genuine move the essay could not do without. Adding a paragraph that merely lists another example is not rewarded and costs you proofreading time.