Discussion (Discuss both views) Environment Task 2

Some argue that protecting rare animals should be a priority for public spending. Others believe that money is better spent on problems affecting people directly.

A full IELTS Writing Task 2 answer to this question at Band 6.0, 7.0, 8.5, with a paragraph plan, the vocabulary that fits this topic, and the reasons each answer scores what it does.

The question

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Some argue that protecting rare animals should be a priority for public spending. Others believe that money is better spent on problems affecting people directly.

Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

How to read this question

Discussion questions carry three obligations — both views and your own — and the opinion must be visible from the introduction, not saved for the last line. The framing worth challenging here is the word "or": the two are presented as competing for the same money, but conservation budgets are tiny beside health or welfare spending, so the trade-off is far less real than the question implies. Noticing that is where a Band 8 answer finds its argument.

Paragraph plan

Introduction — Paraphrase both views, then state a position: the choice is largely false, and conservation is better justified as protection of systems people depend on.

Body 1 — The case for human priorities — the moral force of preventable suffering now versus a species most people will never see.

Body 2 — The case for conservation — extinction is irreversible, and species are components of systems that supply food, water and medicine.

Conclusion — The dichotomy is false at real budget scales; conservation is a form of long-term human welfare spending.

Model answers

Band 6.0 model answer

216 words

People have different opinions about government spending. Some think that the government must protect animals which can disappear, and others think that this money must help people who have problems today.

On the one hand, there are many people who need help immediately. In many countries families do not have enough food, hospitals do not have modern equipment, and some children cannot go to school. When a government spends millions on a programme for one rare bird, it is difficult to explain this to a family which cannot buy medicine for their child.

On the other hand, protecting animals is also very important. When a species disappears, it disappears forever, and nobody can bring it back. Animals are also part of nature, and if one species dies, this can create problems for other animals and plants. For example, if bees disappear, many plants cannot grow and people will not have enough food.

In addition, some medicines come from plants and animals in nature. If we destroy them, maybe we lose a cure for a serious illness in the future.

In my opinion, both are important, but I think helping people should be first, because human life is the most valuable thing. However, the government should also protect nature, because in the end this also protects people.

Why this is Band 6.0

  • Both views are covered and an opinion is given, but it appears mainly in the conclusion rather than guiding the essay.
  • Cohesion is clear and mechanical: On the one hand, On the other hand, In my opinion.
  • Vocabulary is adequate, with animals, people and money repeated throughout.
  • Sentence forms are mainly simple and compound with some correct complex clauses.

Band 7.0 model answer

288 words

Public money is finite, and opinion divides over whether protecting endangered species deserves a share of it while people face immediate hardship. In my view the two are far less opposed than the question suggests, and conservation is best defended as a form of long-term human interest rather than as a competing moral claim.

The argument for prioritising people is straightforward and has real force. Suffering that could be relieved now — hunger, untreated illness, children without schooling — is concrete and measurable, whereas the benefit of preserving a species is distant and often invisible to the population paying for it. Governments are accountable to citizens, and it is genuinely difficult to justify an expensive habitat programme to a family that cannot afford treatment. Any answer that dismisses this is not engaging with the strongest version of the view.

The case for conservation rests on two features that most spending does not share. The first is irreversibility: a hospital that closes can reopen, but an extinct species cannot be recovered at any price, so the decision to postpone is permanent in a way that other postponements are not. The second is that species are not decorative additions to the world but components of systems that supply people with food, clean water and medicine. Pollinator decline is the clearest illustration, since it converts directly into agricultural loss, which means protecting those species is not an alternative to helping people but a method of doing so.

In conclusion, while immediate human needs must come first where the two genuinely compete, I believe the conflict is overstated. Conservation budgets are small beside health or welfare spending, and much of what they protect underpins the very systems that human welfare depends on.

Why this is Band 7.0

  • The opinion is stated in the introduction and shapes both body paragraphs, which is the main thing separating 7 from 6 on this type.
  • The conservation case is argued through a mechanism — irreversibility and system dependence — rather than asserted as important.
  • Less common lexis used accurately: irreversible, ecosystem, allocate, tangible.
  • Good range of complex structures with only minor slips.

Band 8.5 model answer

418 words

The question sets protecting rare species against relieving human hardship as though the two were drawing on the same pot. My position is that this framing does most of the argumentative work and does not deserve to — conservation spending is a rounding error beside health and welfare budgets — and that where the two do compete, the strongest case for conservation is not sentimental but instrumental.

The human-first view should be put at full strength, because it is the more intuitive one. Preventable suffering has a claim on us that a distant species does not: a child who dies of a treatable illness is a definite person, while an extinction is an abstraction most citizens will never observe. Governments answerable to voters cannot easily justify habitat programmes to communities lacking clinics, and there is something uncomfortable about wealthy countries urging conservation on poorer ones whose citizens bear the cost. Anyone who calls this shortsighted has not taken it seriously.

The conservation case is nonetheless stronger than its usual presentation. Two features distinguish it from ordinary spending. The first is irreversibility: almost every other decision can be revisited — a delayed hospital can be built later — whereas an extinct species is unrecoverable at any future price, so deferring is not deferring but deciding. The second is that species are functional components of systems humans depend on. Pollinator collapse translates directly into crop failure; watershed forests determine whether cities have drinking water; a substantial share of pharmaceuticals originates in organisms nobody had a reason to value beforehand. That last point supplies what economists call option value — the worth of keeping open possibilities you cannot yet specify.

Once conservation is understood this way, the opposition largely dissolves, because protecting those systems is spending on human welfare, merely with a longer horizon. The genuine disagreement is not between people and animals but between present and future claims — and the honest observation is that democratic budgeting discounts the future heavily, since the beneficiaries of a fifty-year decision do not vote in the election that funds it.

My own view, then, is that the trade-off is largely false at real budget scales, and that where it is genuine, conservation should be defended on the ground that it protects the systems people live from rather than on the ground that species are beautiful. The second argument is true but persuades nobody who was not already convinced; the first is what makes the spending defensible to the family in the clinic queue.

Why this is Band 8.5

  • Challenges the framing of the question — that the two compete for the same money — and supports the challenge with the relative scale of the budgets, which is the decisive point most answers miss.
  • Both views are argued at their strongest before the reconciliation, so the essay reads as a genuine discussion rather than a balanced-sounding list.
  • Distinguishes two different justifications for conservation (intrinsic and instrumental) and is explicit about which one is doing the work, which is real analytical control.
  • Lexis is precise and idiomatic: instrumental, irreversible, rounding error, option value, discount, false trade-off.
  • Wide structural range used flexibly, including a cleft, fronted concessives and controlled parenthesis; errors are rare and minor.

Model answers written and reviewed by The English All-in-One IELTS team. They are teaching models showing what each band looks like, not real candidate scripts.

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Vocabulary for this topic

Word or phraseMeaningUsed in a sentence
irreversibleimpossible to undo or recoverExtinction is irreversible in a way that most decisions are not.
instrumental (value)valuable because of what it is useful for, not for its own sakeThe instrumental case for conservation is the more persuasive one.
ecosystema community of living things and their environment working togetherSpecies are functional components of ecosystems people depend on.
option valuethe worth of keeping a possibility open for the futureUndiscovered medicines give wild species option value.
to discount the futureto treat future benefits as worth less than present onesDemocratic budgeting discounts the future heavily.
a false trade-offa choice presented as necessary when it is notPeople versus animals is largely a false trade-off.
pollinatoran animal such as a bee that fertilises plantsPollinator decline converts directly into agricultural loss.
watershedthe land area that drains rainfall into a river or reservoirWatershed forests determine whether cities have clean water.

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Common questions

Can I say the two views are not really opposed?

Yes, and it is often the strongest position available on a discussion question — provided you still discuss both views properly first. What you cannot do is use "they are not opposed" to avoid engaging with either. Argue each at full strength, then show why the conflict is smaller than it appears.

How much should I write on the view I disagree with?

Roughly as much as the other. The task instruction is to discuss both, so a short dismissive paragraph is an incomplete response even when your own view is clear. Putting the opposing case at its strongest also makes your conclusion more convincing.

Are examples like bees and medicines too common?

Common examples are fine; IELTS does not reward novelty. What matters is that the example is used to demonstrate a mechanism rather than dropped in as a label. "Bees" alone is weak; explaining that pollinator decline becomes crop failure and therefore a human cost is what earns the mark.

Should the introduction name both views?

Briefly, yes — one sentence paraphrasing the two positions, then one stating yours. It shows immediately that you have registered the task's three obligations, and it saves you from having to explain the framing halfway through.