Discussion (Discuss both views) Work and employment Task 2

Some people believe a job should be chosen for the salary it pays. Others think it matters more that the work itself is enjoyable.

A full IELTS Writing Task 2 answer to this question at Band 6.0, 7.0, 8.5, with a paragraph plan, the vocabulary that fits this topic, and the reasons each answer scores what it does.

The question

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Some people believe a job should be chosen for the salary it pays. Others think it matters more that the work itself is enjoyable.

Discuss both opinions and give your own view.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

How to read this question

The trap in this very common question is that both views are so easy to state that essays become a list of obvious points. The way to lift it is to notice that the choice only exists above a certain income: below the level where bills are covered, there is no trade-off to discuss. Making that condition explicit turns a bland comparison into an argument, and it lets you answer the question rather than sit between the two views.

Paragraph plan

Introduction — Paraphrase both views, then state a position: salary matters absolutely up to sufficiency and much less beyond it, so enjoyment should decide once basic security is met.

Body 1 — The case for salary — it buys security, options and the ability to support others, and financial stress damages everything else.

Body 2 — The case for enjoyment — the sheer quantity of hours involved, and the fact that satisfaction, unlike pay, does not lose its effect over time.

Conclusion — Salary first to a threshold, enjoyment after it — the two views are right about different income levels.

Model answers

Band 6.0 model answer

241 words

When young people choose a career, some of them look first at the salary, and others choose a job that they will enjoy. In my opinion, both things are important, but enjoyment is more important for a long life.

On the one hand, money is necessary for a normal life. A person must pay for a flat, for food, for transport and for the education of his children. If the salary is low, the family has problems every month, and this stress affects the health and the relationships of the person. A good salary also gives security: if somebody in the family becomes ill, the person can pay for treatment immediately.

On the other hand, people spend most of their life at work. Usually a person works eight hours every day for forty years, so if he hates his job, he is unhappy for a very long time. A person who likes his work does it better, learns faster and often gets a promotion, so in the end he can earn a good salary too.

In addition, many people with a high salary have a lot of stress and no free time. They earn a lot of money but they cannot enjoy it, because they work until late every evening.

In conclusion, I think a person should choose a job that he enjoys, but the salary must be enough to live comfortably. The best choice is a job which gives both.

Why this is Band 6.0

  • Both views are covered and an opinion is offered, but the essay lists advantages of each rather than comparing them.
  • Cohesion is clear and mechanical, and the opinion appears mostly at the end.
  • Vocabulary is adequate with heavy repetition of job, money and people.
  • Sentence forms are mainly simple and compound with limited variation.

Band 7.0 model answer

278 words

Some people believe a career should be selected primarily for what it pays, while others hold that enjoying the work matters more. My own view is that the disagreement dissolves once income level is taken into account: pay is decisive up to a point and much less important beyond it.

Below that point, the case for prioritising salary is close to unanswerable. Financial insecurity is not merely uncomfortable; it consumes attention, damages health and removes the ability to plan, and no amount of professional satisfaction compensates for being unable to pay rent. A higher salary also buys options — the freedom to move, to retrain, to support a parent, to leave a bad employer — and those options are themselves a form of independence. Advising someone in genuine financial difficulty to follow their interests is advice that only makes sense to people who have never been in that position.

Once a reasonable standard of living is secured, however, the balance shifts sharply. The most obvious reason is quantity: a career consumes roughly eighty thousand hours, and time spent doing something you dislike is not recovered by the money earned during it. Less obviously, satisfaction from a pay rise fades. People adjust quickly to a higher income and return to their previous level of contentment, whereas work that is genuinely interesting continues to provide value indefinitely because the interest is renewed daily rather than banked.

In conclusion, I believe the two views are each correct within their own range. Salary should determine the choice until basic security is achieved; after that, enjoyment is the better guide, because additional income delivers steadily less while the hours remain exactly as long.

Why this is Band 7.0

  • The introduction sets up a threshold argument that then organises both body paragraphs, so the essay compares rather than lists.
  • The enjoyment case is developed with a real reason — adaptation to income — rather than the usual assertion that happiness matters.
  • Less common lexis used accurately: sufficiency, autonomy, sustained, diminishing.
  • Varied structures with good control; occasional awkwardness but nothing that impedes meaning.

Band 8.5 model answer

416 words

Asked whether pay or enjoyment should govern the choice of a career, most people answer with a compromise that satisfies nobody. I think a sharper answer is available, and it comes from noticing that the two views are not really in competition — they are correct at different income levels, and the disagreement persists because each side generalises from its own position.

Below the point where ordinary costs are comfortably met, salary is decisive, and it is worth being blunt about why. Financial insecurity is not simply an unpleasant background condition; it occupies attention that is then unavailable for anything else, shortens the horizon over which a person can plan, and measurably damages health. Money also purchases something rarely named in these discussions: latitude. A savings buffer is what allows someone to leave an abusive employer, retrain, or absorb a family emergency without catastrophe. Counsel to follow your passion, offered to someone without that buffer, is advice from a position of security to someone who lacks it.

Above that threshold the calculation inverts, for two reasons that reinforce each other. The first is quantity — a working life runs to some eighty thousand hours, and the money earned during unpleasant ones does not buy them back. The second is adaptation. Human beings adjust to a raised income remarkably quickly: within a year or two an increase that once felt transformative has become the new baseline and stops registering at all. Interest in the work behaves quite differently, because it is consumed fresh each day rather than accumulated, so it never fades into the background the way a salary does. Trading a large amount of the second for more of the first is therefore a poor exchange once the first has stopped being scarce.

There is a further asymmetry that favours enjoyment on purely practical grounds. Work you find absorbing tends to compound: you improve faster, you are more willing to do the difficult parts, and the skill that results eventually commands the pay you might otherwise have chased directly. Work you resent produces the opposite spiral, and the resulting mediocrity caps the earnings that were the whole point.

My position, then, is that salary should determine the decision up to sufficiency and enjoyment should determine it beyond — with the honest qualification that many people never reach the threshold and so never face the choice at all. Presenting this as a free decision between two philosophies rather misrepresents how much of it is settled by circumstance.

Why this is Band 8.5

  • Replaces a binary question with a threshold model and defends it, which lets the essay answer decisively instead of concluding that both matter.
  • Introduces the strongest available reason on each side — the option value of money, and hedonic adaptation — rather than the familiar surface points.
  • Acknowledges that the choice itself is a privilege, which is the honest observation most answers on this topic omit.
  • Lexis is precise and idiomatic: adaptation, option value, compounding, latitude, counsel, salient.
  • Wide and flexible structural range, including a cleft, inversion and controlled parenthesis; errors are rare and minor.

Model answers written and reviewed by The English All-in-One IELTS team. They are teaching models showing what each band looks like, not real candidate scripts.

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Vocabulary for this topic

Word or phraseMeaningUsed in a sentence
sufficiencythe point at which you have enough for your needsBeyond sufficiency, extra income adds much less.
adaptation (hedonic)getting used to an improvement so it stops feeling goodAdaptation means a pay rise stops registering within a year.
option valuethe worth of having choices available to youSavings have option value: they let you leave a bad job.
latitudefreedom to act as you chooseMoney buys latitude in a way that job titles do not.
to compoundto build on itself and increase over timeInteresting work compounds, because you improve faster at it.
insecurity (financial)the state of not having reliable moneyFinancial insecurity consumes attention needed elsewhere.
to retrainto learn a different skill in order to change careerA savings buffer is what allows someone to retrain.
buffera reserve that protects you against a shockWithout a savings buffer, a job loss is a catastrophe.

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Common questions

This topic feels obvious. How do I avoid a generic essay?

Add a condition. Instead of arguing that money matters and enjoyment matters, specify when each dominates — here, a threshold of financial sufficiency. A conditional position gives each paragraph a distinct job and immediately separates your answer from the hundreds of essays that conclude "both are important".

Is "both are important" ever an acceptable conclusion?

Only if you have said in what respect and under what conditions. Unqualified, it is the classic Band 6 ending: technically a position, but one the examiner cannot distinguish from having no view. Say which dominates and when.

Can I mention that not everyone gets this choice?

Yes, and it is a mature point that few candidates make. Keep it to a sentence or two near the end so it qualifies your answer rather than replacing it. Raised too early it can look like you are avoiding the question.

Should I use numbers like "eighty thousand hours"?

A rough illustrative figure is fine and adds force, provided you present it as approximate. Avoid precise statistics you cannot support — IELTS does not check them, but an over-specific claim tends to invite complicated grammar and adds no marks.