Discussion (Discuss both views) Health Task 2

Some believe that healthcare should be funded entirely by the state. Others argue that people who can afford to contribute to their own care should do so.

A full IELTS Writing Task 2 answer to this question at Band 6.0, 7.0, 8.5, with a paragraph plan, the vocabulary that fits this topic, and the reasons each answer scores what it does.

The question

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Some believe that healthcare should be funded entirely by the state. Others argue that people who can afford to contribute to their own care should do so.

Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

How to read this question

Both views here are about who pays, not about who gets treated — and conflating the two is the usual error. The sharpest observation available is that a private tier does not simply add capacity: doctors are a fixed pool in the short run, so a second system staffed from the same pool moves clinicians rather than creating them. Building the answer on that keeps it out of the generic "fairness versus choice" groove.

Paragraph plan

Introduction — Paraphrase both views, then state a position: state funding as the universal base, because health spending is unpredictable and risk has to be pooled.

Body 1 — The case for full state funding — illness is unaffordable and unpredictable, so pooling is the only rational structure; and a single system has bargaining power.

Body 2 — The case for private payment — it adds money and relieves pressure, and forbidding it is hard to justify in a free society.

Conclusion — Universal state provision, with private care permitted but staffed and regulated so it does not drain the public system.

Model answers

Band 6.0 model answer

237 words

People disagree about how medical services should be paid for. Some think the government must pay for everything, while others believe rich people should pay for their own treatment. In my opinion, the state should provide healthcare for all citizens.

On the one hand, health is not a normal product. A person cannot decide when he will become ill, and serious treatment costs thousands of dollars, which most families do not have. If a poor person cannot pay, he will not go to the doctor early, and later his illness becomes much more serious and much more expensive. A system paid by taxes protects everybody from this situation.

On the other hand, when rich people pay privately, they bring extra money into the health sector. They also do not use the public hospitals, so the queues for other patients become shorter. Furthermore, some people say it is their own money and they should be free to spend it on a better service if they want.

However, there is also a problem with private hospitals. The best doctors often leave the public system because the salary is higher in private clinics, so the quality of public hospitals becomes worse.

In conclusion, I believe that the state should pay for healthcare, because everybody must have the same chance to be treated. Private clinics can exist, but the government must make sure that public hospitals still have enough good doctors.

Why this is Band 6.0

  • Both views are covered and an opinion is given, but each side is described rather than weighed against the other.
  • Cohesion is clear and mechanical, with the position arriving in the conclusion.
  • Vocabulary is adequate with repetition of health, money and people.
  • Sentences are largely simple and compound with some accurate complex forms.

Band 7.0 model answer

296 words

Opinion divides over whether healthcare should be funded wholly by the state or partly by those who can afford to pay for themselves. I believe universal state funding must form the base of any system, primarily because of how the cost of illness behaves.

Medical need is unpredictable and occasionally enormous. Nobody can forecast a cancer diagnosis or a serious accident, and the resulting bills routinely exceed what an ordinary household could ever save. Risk of that shape can only be handled by pooling it across a whole population, which is precisely what tax funding does. There is a practical consequence too: where people pay at the point of use, they delay seeking help, and conditions that were cheap to treat early become expensive emergencies later, so a system that deters early visits often costs more overall. A single national purchaser also has considerable bargaining power over drug prices, which fragmented private buyers do not.

The argument for allowing private payment is not without force. It introduces additional money into healthcare, patients who go privately are no longer occupying public capacity, and prohibiting people from spending their own income on their own health is difficult to defend in a free society. The difficulty is that private provision does not create doctors; it recruits them from the same limited pool, usually with higher pay. Unless training places expand alongside it, a growing private sector draws experienced clinicians out of public hospitals and the waiting lists it was supposed to relieve grow instead.

In conclusion, I support healthcare funded by the state for everyone, with private care permitted rather than banned. The condition is that it must be regulated and staffed so that it adds capacity to the system rather than transferring it from those who cannot pay.

Why this is Band 7.0

  • The position is stated in the introduction and both paragraphs argue towards it rather than describing each view in turn.
  • The state-funding case is grounded in a mechanism — unpredictability and risk pooling — rather than in fairness alone.
  • Less common lexis used accurately: pooled, preventive, bargaining power, capacity.
  • A range of complex structures with good control; minor slips do not impede meaning.

Band 8.5 model answer

442 words

Arguments about healthcare funding usually collapse two separate questions into one: who pays, and who is permitted to buy more. Keeping them apart makes a clearer answer possible. My position is that funding must be universal and public, while private purchase should be allowed but constrained — and the reason for the constraint is not egalitarian sentiment but arithmetic about the workforce.

The case for public funding rests on the shape of medical risk rather than on fairness. Health costs are unpredictable, highly skewed and occasionally catastrophic: most people spend little in most years, and a small minority incur bills no household could save against. Insurance is the only rational response to that distribution, and voluntary insurance markets handle it badly, because the healthy opt out and premiums rise for those remaining until the people who most need cover are the least able to obtain it. Universal tax funding is simply the most complete form of risk pooling available, and it avoids that spiral by construction. It also confers real purchasing power — a single national buyer negotiates drug prices that fragmented private purchasers cannot.

A second argument is often overlooked. Charging at the point of use does not merely inconvenience patients; it changes when they arrive. Conditions that are cheap to treat early become expensive when presented late, so systems that deter early consultation frequently spend more in total while delivering worse outcomes — an unusual case where the generous option is also the economical one.

The liberty objection nonetheless deserves a serious answer, because it is the strongest thing the other side has: forbidding someone from spending their own money on their own health is a considerable intrusion, and few countries attempt it. The real problem with a private tier is not that it is unfair but that it is not additive. Doctors and nurses take a decade to train, so their supply is fixed in the short run, and a private sector staffed from that pool does not expand capacity — it relocates it, typically towards those who need it least. Where this happens without a matching expansion of training places, the public waiting lists the private sector was meant to relieve lengthen instead. That is a zero-sum outcome dressed as a market solution.

My conclusion is therefore a qualified one on both sides. Healthcare should be funded by the state for everybody, because that is what the structure of medical risk requires. Private care should be permitted, because prohibiting it is illiberal and largely unenforceable — but only alongside a genuine expansion of the workforce, without which a second system does not add care, it merely reallocates it.

Why this is Band 8.5

  • Identifies the decisive point — that a private tier redistributes a fixed supply of clinicians rather than adding to it — which most answers on this topic never reach.
  • Argues the opposing case at full strength, including the liberty objection, before answering it with a design condition rather than a dismissal.
  • Separates the funding question from the provision question explicitly, which is what allows a clean position instead of a compromise.
  • Lexis is precise and idiomatic: risk pooling, adverse selection, monopsony, zero-sum, at the point of use, latent.
  • Wide structural range used flexibly, with a cleft, fronted concessives and controlled parenthesis; errors are rare and minor.

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Vocabulary for this topic

Word or phraseMeaningUsed in a sentence
risk poolingspreading unpredictable costs across a large groupTax funding is the most complete form of risk pooling.
at the point of useat the moment the service is receivedCharging at the point of use delays when patients seek help.
adverse selectionwhen healthy people opt out of insurance, raising costs for the restVoluntary insurance markets suffer from adverse selection.
preventive caretreatment that stops problems before they become seriousPreventive care is cheaper than emergency treatment.
bargaining powerthe ability to negotiate better terms or pricesA single national purchaser has real bargaining power over drug prices.
additiveadding to the total rather than moving it aroundA private tier is not additive if it recruits existing doctors.

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Common questions

How do I avoid a generic "fairness versus choice" essay on this topic?

Find a mechanism instead of a value. Here it is that clinicians take a decade to train, so a private sector recruits rather than creates them. Arguments built on how something works are much harder to answer than arguments built on what you think is right, and examiners can see the difference.

Is it acceptable to disagree with both views partially?

Yes, provided the result is a definite position rather than a hedge. "Public funding, private care permitted but conditional" is a clear stance with an argument behind it. "Both have good points" is not.

Do I need to know about health systems in specific countries?

No. General knowledge of how insurance and training work is enough, and it is safer. Naming a country's system invites factual claims you may not be able to defend, and IELTS gives no credit for the detail.