Band 6.0 model answer
234 wordsSome people believe that children should start to learn programming when they are still in primary school, while others think that reading and writing are more important at this age. In my opinion, basic skills must come first.
On the one hand, technology is everywhere in modern life. Almost every job today uses computers, and in the future the number of jobs connected with programming will be even bigger. If a child starts early, the subject seems normal and not frightening for him, and he can build a strong base for university. Programming also teaches logical thinking, because a child must divide a big problem into small steps and find his mistakes.
On the other hand, reading and writing are the base of all education. If a ten-year-old child cannot read well, he cannot study history, science or even mathematics, because all these subjects need reading. A child who has problems with reading in primary school usually has problems in every subject later, and it is very difficult to correct this after some years.
In addition, the school day has a limited number of hours. If we add programming lessons, we must remove something else, and probably it will be reading or writing time.
In conclusion, although programming is a useful skill for the future, I believe that primary schools should give priority to reading and writing, and teach programming later, in secondary school.
Why this is Band 6.0
- Both views are covered and an opinion is given, but the discussion is descriptive rather than comparative — the essay does not weigh the two against each other.
- Cohesion is clear and mechanical, with the opinion arriving in the conclusion.
- Vocabulary is adequate for the topic with repetition of children, computer and important.
- Sentences are mainly simple and compound; complex forms are correct but repetitive.