Discussion (Discuss both views) Tourism and travel Task 2

Some people say that international tourism damages the places it visits. Others argue that it is the main reason many historical sites survive at all.

A full IELTS Writing Task 2 answer to this question at Band 6.0, 7.0, 8.5, with a paragraph plan, the vocabulary that fits this topic, and the reasons each answer scores what it does.

The question

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Some people say that international tourism damages the places it visits. Others argue that it is the main reason many historical sites survive at all.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

How to read this question

Both claims in this question are true, which is why undirected essays go nowhere. The useful move is to ask what determines <em>which</em> outcome occurs — volume, ownership and where the revenue lands — and answer on that basis. That converts an unresolvable clash of assertions into a question you can actually settle, and it gives your own opinion something to be about.

Paragraph plan

Introduction — Paraphrase both views, then state a position: both are true of different situations, and what decides it is volume and who owns the revenue.

Body 1 — The damage case — concentration in time and space, housing converted to short lets, and heritage worn by sheer numbers.

Body 2 — The sustaining case — tourism funds conservation and gives economic value to things otherwise worth demolishing.

Conclusion — Neither is inherent; the outcome is set by management, so the real question is who controls the volume and keeps the money.

Model answers

Band 6.0 model answer

230 words

Every year millions of people travel to other countries. Some people believe that tourism destroys the places that tourists visit, while others think it is the main income of many regions. In my opinion, both opinions are correct in different situations.

On the one hand, tourism can create serious damage. When too many people visit an old building or a beach every day, the place becomes dirty and it is slowly destroyed. Prices also increase in these cities, so local families cannot buy food or pay the rent, because owners prefer to rent flats to tourists for a higher price. In addition, many traditions become a show for visitors and lose their real meaning.

On the other hand, for many small towns tourism is the only source of money. It gives jobs to guides, drivers, waiters and hotel workers, and these families have no other work in the region. The government also uses this money to repair museums and historical buildings, so tourism actually protects the heritage.

Moreover, when a place becomes famous, the local people understand that their traditions and nature have value, and they start to protect them instead of destroying them.

In conclusion, I believe tourism is not good or bad in itself. If the number of visitors is controlled and the money stays in the local area, tourism helps the place; without control, it damages it.

Why this is Band 6.0

  • Both views are covered with relevant points and an opinion is given, but the essay lists effects rather than explaining what causes them.
  • Cohesion is correct and mechanical, with connectors at the start of each paragraph.
  • Vocabulary is adequate for the topic with repetition of tourists, country and money.
  • Structures are mainly simple and compound with limited variety.

Band 7.0 model answer

279 words

International tourism is described both as a destructive force and as the economic foundation of entire regions. My view is that both descriptions are accurate, and that what separates them is not the presence of tourists but the volume, the ownership and where the money ends up.

The damage is real where visits are concentrated. Tourism arrives in narrow seasons and in a handful of streets, so a city can be almost empty for eight months and unusable for four, and infrastructure built for the peak sits idle the rest of the year. The most serious harm, however, is to housing. When a flat earns more as a short-term let than as a home, landlords convert, and residents are gradually displaced from the centre of their own city — which then loses the schools, shops and ordinary life that made it worth visiting. Heritage suffers physically too: paths, floors and monuments are worn by numbers they were never built for.

The opposing case is equally well founded. For many rural and coastal areas there is no realistic alternative employer, and tourism supports guides, transport, restaurants and accommodation in places that would otherwise export their young people permanently. Crucially, it also gives economic value to things that are otherwise expensive to keep. A crumbling old quarter that generates income is restored; the same quarter without visitors is demolished for something more profitable, and craft traditions survive where there is a market for them.

In conclusion, tourism is neither inherently destructive nor inherently protective. Where visitor numbers are managed and revenue is retained locally, it preserves places; where volume is unlimited and profits are extracted by outside operators, it consumes them.

Why this is Band 7.0

  • The essay identifies the variables that decide the outcome, so the two views are reconciled by analysis rather than by compromise.
  • The housing point is developed into a mechanism rather than asserted as a price rise.
  • Less common lexis used accurately: seasonal, heritage, displacement, revenue.
  • Good range of complex forms with only minor slips.

Band 8.5 model answer

445 words

Both claims in this debate are true, which is why arguing for one of them tends to produce an essay that convinces nobody. The more useful question is what determines which outcome a particular place gets, and the answer turns on three things: how concentrated the visits are, who owns the businesses receiving the money, and whether anyone is empowered to limit the numbers.

Damage is a function of concentration rather than of tourism as such. Visitors arrive in short seasons and cluster in a few streets, so the load on a place bears no relation to the annual average — and beyond a certain carrying capacity the harm is not gradual but sudden. The most consequential effect is on housing. Once a flat earns more by the night than by the month, conversion is not a moral failing but an obvious commercial decision, and the cumulative result is that residents are priced out of their own centre. What follows is a monoculture: the bakery becomes a souvenir shop, the school closes for lack of children, and the district retains the appearance of the place people came to see while ceasing to be it.

The sustaining case is stronger than its critics allow, and rests on a point rarely made explicitly. Tourism assigns economic value to things that are otherwise pure cost. An old quarter, a craft tradition or a wetland does not pay for its own maintenance; where visitors give it income, it is restored and defended, and where they do not, it is quietly replaced by something more profitable. Heritage that nobody visits is generally the first to be demolished — which means the tourist gaze, uncomfortable as it can be, is frequently the only thing standing between a building and a car park.

What decides between these outcomes is chiefly ownership. Where hotels, tours and transport are owned outside the region, most of the revenue leaves almost immediately — leakage, in the standard term — and the community is left with the crowds, the wear and the housing costs while the returns accrue elsewhere. That is an extractive arrangement, and it is what people usually mean when they say tourism destroyed a place. Where ownership is local and volume is capped, the same number of visitors funds the maintenance of the thing they came for.

My position, then, is that neither view describes tourism itself; both describe how it has been managed. Since the harmful outcome is what emerges by default when nobody sets a limit, the practical conclusion is that places need the authority to cap numbers and retain revenue before the visitors arrive rather than after the damage is evident.

Why this is Band 8.5

  • Refuses the framing that one view must be correct and instead identifies the conditions that produce each outcome — the strongest available answer to a question where both claims are true.
  • Reaches a non-obvious point: tourism gives heritage an economic value it otherwise lacks, which is why unvisited heritage is frequently the first to be lost.
  • Names the ownership question — where revenue lands — as the variable that actually decides, which most answers omit entirely.
  • Lexis is precise and idiomatic: leakage, monoculture, displacement, carrying capacity, extractive, contingent.
  • Wide and flexible structural range including a cleft, inversion and controlled parenthesis; errors are rare and minor.

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Vocabulary for this topic

Word or phraseMeaningUsed in a sentence
carrying capacitythe number of visitors a place can take without being damagedHarm begins once carrying capacity is exceeded.
leakagetourist money that leaves the local economy immediatelyForeign-owned hotels cause high leakage of revenue.
displacementresidents being pushed out of an area by rising costsShort-term lets cause displacement from city centres.
monoculturean area given over entirely to one activityThe district becomes a tourist monoculture with no ordinary life.
extractivetaking value out of a place without returning anyExternally owned tourism is often extractive.
heritagebuildings and traditions inherited from the pastTourism gives heritage an economic value it otherwise lacks.

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Common questions

What do I do when both views in the question are obviously true?

Stop trying to pick one and identify the variable that decides between them — here, volume and ownership. "Both are true, and here is what determines which" is a genuine opinion, not a hedge, and it is usually the strongest answer available on this kind of question.

Is "it depends" an acceptable position?

Only if you say what it depends on and argue for that. Unqualified, it is the weakest possible ending. Qualified with a mechanism, it is a sophisticated one — the difference is entirely in whether you name the condition.

Can I use examples of famous tourist cities?

Yes, but describe the mechanism rather than relying on the name. "Housing converted to short lets, so residents left, so schools closed" works whether or not the examiner knows the city. A name with no explanation earns nothing.