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Advantages and Disadvantages Technology Task 2

People rely heavily on smartphones. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

A full IELTS Writing Task 2 answer to this question, with a paragraph plan, ideas you can use, and the vocabulary that fits this topic.

The question

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

People rely heavily on smartphones. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

How to read this question

You are asked to outline advantages and disadvantages. Read the question line carefully: if it asks whether the advantages outweigh the disadvantages, an even-handed essay with no verdict cannot score above Band 6 for Task Response.

Paragraph plan

Introduction — Paraphrase the prompt and add a neutral sentence — do not list all body ideas in detail.

Body 1 — Two advantages: convenience of digital payments and instant communication across distances.

Body 2 — Two disadvantages: erosion of independent skills in younger people and vulnerability of elderly users to online fraud.

Conclusion — Neutral summary — no opinion, no 'outweigh' language.

Model essay

Band 8.5–9.0 model essay

266 words

People have become reliant on smartphones. Although this trend can produce favourable outcomes, such as easing everyday responsibilities and communication over long distances, it is not without its drawbacks.

On the one hand, thanks to mobile phones, people are no longer obligated to commute to post offices, utility payment points, or other similar venues to pay for electricity, water, or TV subscriptions. Furthermore, mobile phones eliminate geographical barriers to communication. In contrast to the past, when a simple response letter from a family member studying or living abroad could take days or weeks to reach the recipient, people now can enjoy near-instant communication with family members, relatives, or friends residing in foreign countries. This, in turn, prevents people's stress levels which used to accumulate when waiting for a response.

On the other hand, people's dependence on smartphones could also have counterproductive consequences. First, owing to constant exposure of the young to the allure of social media, they become too immersed in a virtual world, ignoring their real-life commitments. This is particularly evident among the teenagers who refuse to disconnect from the internet, neglecting their academic assignments. Another adverse effect concerns the elderly. To clarify, a considerable number of older people are not sufficiently informed about how to use technology and are thus vulnerable to cyberattacks and financial exploitation. Therefore, numerous elderly victims of such illicit activities are reported daily in many countries.

To conclude, despite smartphones simplifying people's routine chores and removing geographical obstacles to interaction, they also experience implications: young people become addicted to the virtual world, while the ageing population is targeted by cybercriminals.

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Ideas & vocabulary for this topic

Ideas you can use

  • Introduction: State neutrally that smartphone reliance brings both favourable outcomes and drawbacks, without taking a personal side.
  • Body 1: Give the advantages: no need to travel to pay bills in person, and near-instant long-distance communication that removes the stress of waiting for a reply.
  • Body 2: Give the disadvantages: young people become immersed in social media and neglect academic responsibilities, while elderly users with limited tech literacy are vulnerable to cyberattacks and financial exploitation.
  • Conclusion: Give a neutral summary: smartphones simplify daily tasks and remove communication barriers, but bring addiction risk for the young and cybercrime risk for the elderly.
Word or phraseMeaningUsed in a sentence
reliantdependent on something for support or functionpeople have become reliant on smartphones
obligatedrequired or bound by necessity to do somethingpeople are no longer obligated to commute to post offices
geographical barriersobstacles to communication or travel caused by physical distancemobile phones eliminate geographical barriers to communication
near-instanthappening almost immediately, with virtually no delaypeople now can enjoy near-instant communication with family members
counterproductivehaving the opposite effect to the one intendedpeople's dependence on smartphones could also have counterproductive consequences
allurethe quality of being attractive or temptingconstant exposure of the young to the allure of social media
vulnerableeasily harmed or exploitedvulnerable to cyberattacks and financial exploitation
illicit activitiesactions that are illegal or forbiddennumerous elderly victims of such illicit activities are reported daily

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