Band 6.0 model answer
221 wordsGovernments spend billions of dollars on space programmes every year. Some people believe this is necessary for the future of humanity, while others think this money should solve problems on Earth. In my opinion, space exploration is useful and should continue.
On the one hand, our planet has very serious problems. Millions of people do not have clean water, hospitals need equipment, and many children cannot go to school. When people hear that a rocket costs billions of dollars, they think this money could save many lives immediately, and this opinion is easy to understand.
On the other hand, space technology gives us many things that we use every day. Satellites give us weather forecasts, television, GPS navigation in our cars and telephones, and they also help scientists to see pollution and forest fires from above. Many inventions, for example solar panels and some medical equipment, were first created for space programmes.
In addition, space research helps us to understand our own planet. Satellites show how the ice is melting and how the climate is changing, and without this information governments cannot make good decisions.
In conclusion, although the problems on Earth are very important, I believe that space exploration is not a waste of money, because it gives practical benefits to ordinary people and helps us protect our own planet.
Why this is Band 6.0
- Both views are covered and an opinion is given, but the essay asserts benefits rather than demonstrating them.
- Cohesion is correct and mechanical, with the opinion arriving in the conclusion.
- Vocabulary is adequate with repetition of space, money and problems.
- Sentences are mainly simple and compound with limited variety.