Opinion (Agree / Disagree) Crime and punishment Task 2

Offenders should be required to do unpaid work in their communities rather than serve short prison sentences.

A full IELTS Writing Task 2 answer to this question at Band 6.0, 7.0, 8.5, with a paragraph plan, the vocabulary that fits this topic, and the reasons each answer scores what it does.

The question

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Offenders should be required to do unpaid work in their communities rather than serve short prison sentences.

What is your opinion?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

How to read this question

"What is your opinion?" requires a verdict, and the comparison is already built into the question — community work <em>rather than</em> short sentences. So the essay is not about whether prison works in general; it is about which of two options is better for one specific group: people who would otherwise serve a few months. Keeping that narrow is what separates a focused Band 8 answer from a general essay about crime.

Paragraph plan

Introduction — Paraphrase, then agree: for short sentences specifically, community work is better on every measure that matters.

Body 1 — Why short sentences fail — too short to rehabilitate, long enough to destroy a job, a home and a family.

Body 2 — What community work does instead — keeps the stabilising factors intact and makes the punishment visible to the people harmed.

Conclusion — Agree, with the limit that this applies to non-violent offenders and requires genuine enforcement to hold public confidence.

Model answers

Band 6.0 model answer

257 words

Some people believe that criminals who commit small crimes should work for their community without payment instead of going to prison for a few months. In my opinion, this is a better solution for most of these cases.

Firstly, a short time in prison does not change a person. Three or six months is not enough time for education or for a professional programme, so the prisoner comes out with the same problems that he had before. Moreover, in prison he meets more dangerous criminals and he can learn bad things from them, so sometimes he becomes worse than before.

Secondly, prison destroys the normal life of the person. He loses his job, maybe he loses his flat because he cannot pay the rent, and his family suffers without his salary. When he comes out, he has no work and no money, so it is easy for him to commit a crime again. Community service does not create these problems because the person continues to live at home and to work.

In addition, the society gets a real benefit. The offender cleans parks, paints buildings or helps old people, so he pays back to the people he hurt. This is more useful than sitting in a cell, and it also costs much less money for the government.

In conclusion, I think unpaid community work is better than a short prison sentence, because it does not destroy the life of the offender and it gives something back to society. However, this should not be used for violent criminals.

Why this is Band 6.0

  • A clear opinion with relevant reasons, but the ideas stay general — the essay says prison does not help without showing what happens to the person inside.
  • Cohesion is correct and mechanical, with a connector opening each paragraph.
  • Vocabulary is adequate for the topic, with criminals, prison and society repeating.
  • Sentences are mostly simple and compound; complex forms are correct but repetitive.

Band 7.0 model answer

271 words

It is increasingly argued that offenders facing short custodial terms should instead be required to carry out unpaid work in their communities. In my view this is the better option, primarily because short sentences are uniquely bad at achieving anything that prison is supposed to achieve.

The central problem is a mismatch of duration. A few months is far too short for any meaningful rehabilitation — education and treatment programmes typically require longer than the sentence itself, so most people serving short terms simply wait them out. Yet the same few months are more than long enough to be destructive. An offender usually loses their job immediately, often loses their housing, and returns with none of the stabilising factors that make a lawful life possible. Since unemployment and homelessness are among the strongest predictors of reoffending, a short sentence frequently increases the risk it was meant to reduce.

Community work avoids this by leaving those factors intact. The offender keeps their employment and their home, continues to support dependants, and is punished through the loss of their own time rather than through the collapse of everything around them. There is a further advantage in visibility: repairing property or working in a public facility makes the penalty apparent to the community that was harmed, which a prison sentence, served out of sight, never is. It is also considerably cheaper for the state than a custodial place.

In conclusion, I support replacing short sentences with unpaid community work for non-violent offences. The alternative removes the conditions that keep people out of trouble while providing none of the benefits that longer sentences can offer.

Why this is Band 7.0

  • The essay identifies the specific weakness of short sentences — too short to help, long enough to damage — which gives it a genuine argument rather than a general dislike of prison.
  • Points are extended into consequences: losing housing is traced through to reoffending.
  • Less common lexis used accurately: rehabilitation, reoffending, custodial, deterrent.
  • Range includes concession, conditionals and relative clauses; minor slips do not impede meaning.

Band 8.5 model answer

428 words

The proposal is narrower than it first appears, and its narrowness is the point: nobody is suggesting that community work replace prison generally, only that it replace sentences of a few months. That distinction matters, because short custodial terms occupy a peculiar position — they are too brief to accomplish anything and quite long enough to destroy a great deal. On that specific comparison I think the case for community work is overwhelming.

Consider what a three-month sentence can actually do. Rehabilitation programmes, training and treatment all run longer than the term itself, so someone serving it will typically be released before any intervention begins; in practice the time is spent waiting. What the same period reliably achieves is attrition of everything holding the person's life together. Employment goes almost immediately, tenancies lapse when rent stops, and family relationships absorb a shock the offender is not present to manage. The individual returns with the same difficulties that produced the offence, minus the job, the address and the relationships — which is why criminologists describe short sentences as criminogenic: they measurably raise the probability of the next offence.

Community work is preferable not because it is gentler but because it preserves the conditions under which desistance actually happens. Someone who keeps working, keeps their home and keeps supporting their children retains the things people credit when they explain why they stopped offending. The punishment is real — unpaid labour on your own time is a genuine imposition — but it is targeted at the offender rather than radiating outwards onto dependants who committed no offence. It also has a quality prison entirely lacks: it is visible. Restoring what was damaged, in the place it was damaged, is legible to the community in a way that a sentence served elsewhere never is.

The serious objection is not about effectiveness but about confidence. If the public perceives this as an offender escaping punishment, support for the whole system erodes, and that perception is not irrational when community orders are poorly supervised and quietly abandoned. But the answer to weak enforcement is enforcement, not incarceration: orders that are demanding, properly monitored and reliably escalated when breached command respect, whereas ones that are nominal deserve the scepticism they receive.

My position, then, is that unpaid community work should be the default for non-violent offences that would otherwise attract a short sentence — provided it is enforced seriously enough to be believed. Prison remains necessary where the public must be protected. It is simply the wrong instrument for the cases this question is about.

Why this is Band 8.5

  • Answers the precise question — the comparison between two options for one group — and refuses to widen it into a general argument about prison, which is what keeps the response sharp.
  • Identifies a genuine paradox (the sentence is too short to reform and long enough to destabilise) and builds the whole argument from it.
  • Deals with the strongest objection — that this looks like leniency and costs public confidence — rather than ignoring it, and answers it on its own terms.
  • Lexis is precise and idiomatic: custodial, criminogenic, desistance, attrition, proportionate.
  • Wide structural range used flexibly, including a cleft, fronted concessives and controlled parenthesis; errors are rare and minor.

Model answers written and reviewed by The English All-in-One IELTS team. They are teaching models showing what each band looks like, not real candidate scripts.

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Vocabulary for this topic

Word or phraseMeaningUsed in a sentence
custodial sentencea punishment served in prisonShort custodial sentences achieve very little.
rehabilitationhelping an offender change so they do not offend againRehabilitation programmes run longer than a short sentence.
to reoffendto commit another crime after being punishedHomelessness is a strong predictor of reoffending.
criminogenictending to cause crime rather than prevent itShort sentences are often described as criminogenic.
desistancethe process of stopping offendingStable work and housing support desistance.
attritionthe gradual wearing away or loss of somethingA few months in prison causes attrition of job, home and relationships.
proportionatematching the seriousness of what was doneThe penalty should be proportionate to the offence.
to escalate (a penalty)to increase it when rules are brokenOrders must be escalated reliably when they are breached.

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Common questions

Does "What is your opinion?" need a position as strongly as "To what extent"?

Yes — arguably more, since there is no "extent" to hide behind. State your view in the introduction and defend it. An essay that surveys both sides and closes with "it depends" cannot score well for Task Response on this wording.

Should I limit my answer to the group the question names?

Yes, and saying so explicitly is a strength. This question is about people facing short sentences, not about prison in general. Widening the scope is the most common way candidates drift off-task here and lose Task Response marks while writing perfectly good English.

Is it acceptable to sound like I am defending criminals?

You are arguing about policy, not expressing sympathy, and examiners assess the argument rather than the position. The Band 8.5 model handles this by being explicit that community work is punishment and by addressing the fairness objection head-on — which is more persuasive than avoiding the discomfort.

Can I use terms like "criminogenic" if I am not sure of them?

Only if you are confident of both the meaning and the grammar around it. A precise everyday phrase used correctly scores higher than a technical term used slightly wrongly — Lexical Resource rewards accuracy of use, not rarity on its own.