Opinion (Agree / Disagree) Sport Task 2

Professional athletes are paid far more than their contribution to society deserves.

A full IELTS Writing Task 2 answer to this question at Band 6.0, 7.0, 8.5, with a paragraph plan, the vocabulary that fits this topic, and the reasons each answer scores what it does.

The question

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Professional athletes are paid far more than their contribution to society deserves.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

How to read this question

The phrase to interrogate is "contribution to society deserves". It smuggles in an assumption — that pay ought to track social value — which is not how any labour market works. You can accept the assumption and argue about whether athletes meet it, or challenge it and argue that pay tracks scarcity and revenue instead. The second route is harder but produces a much stronger essay, because it disputes the question rather than merely answering it.

Paragraph plan

Introduction — Paraphrase, then reject the premise: pay reflects revenue and scarcity, not desert, so the comparison is misconceived.

Body 1 — Concede the intuition — the gap against nurses and teachers is genuinely jarring and worth taking seriously.

Body 2 — Explain the actual mechanism — athletes are paid from money they generate, and the alternative is not redistribution to nurses but retention by owners.

Conclusion — The complaint identifies a real problem but misidentifies its cause: the issue is how essential work is funded, not how athletes are paid.

Model answers

Band 6.0 model answer

247 words

Famous football players and other sportsmen receive enormous salaries, sometimes millions of dollars every year. Many people believe this is not fair because they do not help society as much as other professions. I partly agree with this opinion.

On the one hand, it is difficult to accept that a footballer earns in one week what a nurse earns in ten years. Doctors save lives, teachers educate the future generation, and firefighters risk their own life for other people. If we compare the real benefit for society, these professions are much more important than kicking a ball, so the difference in salary looks completely unfair.

On the other hand, we must remember that sport is a big business. Millions of people buy tickets, watch television and buy the shirts of their favourite team. All this money comes into the club, so the club can pay a high salary. The player is the reason people pay, so it is logical that he receives a part of this money.

In addition, the career of an athlete is very short. He can play until thirty-five years old, and one serious injury can finish everything in one moment. A doctor works until sixty-five, so he has many more years to earn.

In conclusion, I understand why people think these salaries are too high, but the money comes from the public who love sport. The real problem is not that athletes earn too much, but that nurses and teachers earn too little.

Why this is Band 6.0

  • A clear position with relevant reasons on both sides, but the argument stays at the level of comparison — the essay says doctors save lives without explaining why pay differs.
  • Cohesion is correct and mechanical, with connectors opening each paragraph.
  • Vocabulary is adequate with repetition of money, players and society.
  • Sentences are largely simple and compound with some correct complex forms.

Band 7.0 model answer

272 words

The salaries earned by leading professional athletes are frequently condemned as disproportionate to what they contribute to society. The comparison is emotionally understandable, but I think it rests on an assumption about pay that does not survive examination.

The intuition itself deserves respect. There is something genuinely uncomfortable about a footballer earning in a week what an experienced nurse earns in several years, particularly when the nurse's work is plainly indispensable and the footballer's is entertainment. Anyone who dismisses that feeling as naive is avoiding the question rather than answering it, and the discomfort points at a real problem about how societies value essential work.

Nevertheless, no labour market pays according to social contribution, and it is not clear how one could. Wages reflect the revenue a person generates and how easily they can be replaced. Elite sport attracts vast sums from broadcasters, sponsors and spectators, and the handful of athletes capable of performing at that level are extraordinarily scarce — which is precisely why their pay is high. The crucial point is what happens if it were capped: the audience would not stop paying and the revenue would not vanish. It would simply remain with club owners and broadcasters instead. A salary cap on athletes is a transfer from players to owners, not from players to nurses.

In conclusion, I disagree that athletes are overpaid relative to what they deserve, because pay has never tracked desert in any occupation. The genuine grievance behind the statement — that essential public work is badly rewarded — is real, but it is a question about how such work is funded rather than about sport.

Why this is Band 7.0

  • The essay separates the moral intuition from the economic mechanism, which gives it a controlling idea rather than two opposed lists.
  • The counter-argument is properly developed — where the money actually goes if not to players.
  • Less common lexis used accurately: revenue, scarcity, redistributed, desert.
  • A range of complex structures with good control; minor slips do not impede meaning.

Band 8.5 model answer

405 words

The claim contains a hidden premise: that pay ought to correspond to social contribution. Stated openly, few people would defend it as a description of how any economy works, and it is worth noticing that we do not apply it consistently — nobody argues that a cardiologist should earn less than a rural midwife on grounds of lives touched. My disagreement with the statement is therefore not that athletes contribute more than they seem to, but that desert was never what wages measured.

The intuition behind the complaint nonetheless deserves to be taken seriously rather than waved away. There is something genuinely disordered about a striker earning in ninety minutes what a paediatric nurse earns in a year, and the discomfort is not envy — it is a reasonable objection to a society whose rewards appear detached from its stated values. Any answer that treats that reaction as economic illiteracy has dodged the question.

What wages actually track is revenue generated and bargaining power, which together explain the figures completely. Elite sport commands enormous sums from broadcasters and sponsors, and the number of people who can perform at that level is vanishingly small; extreme scarcity meeting extreme revenue produces extreme pay, exactly as it does for a handful of surgeons, lawyers and musicians. Athletes are not paid from a public fund that could have gone elsewhere. They are paid from money that exists only because people choose to watch them.

This is where the argument for capping their pay collapses, and the collapse is worth stating precisely. Suppose salaries were halved: the broadcasting contracts would not shrink, ticket prices would not fall, and the audience would not redirect its spending to healthcare. The money would remain with club owners and media companies, who have no stronger claim to it and considerably more of it already. The counterfactual to a highly paid player is not a better paid nurse; it is a wealthier owner. Framing this as a zero-sum contest between athletes and essential workers conflates two entirely separate systems of payment.

My position, then, is that the statement misdiagnoses a real problem. Essential public work is underpaid — not because entertainers are overpaid, but because such work is funded from constrained public budgets rather than from revenue it can capture directly. That is a question about taxation and public spending, and answering it by reducing footballers' wages would leave every nurse exactly where they were.

Why this is Band 8.5

  • Challenges the premise of the question rather than answering within it, and says so explicitly — one of the clearest available demonstrations of a high Task Response.
  • Concedes the emotional force of the opposing view fully before dismantling it, so the refutation reads as fair rather than evasive.
  • The decisive argument — that capping pay transfers money to owners, not to nurses — is a genuine analytical move that most answers on this topic never reach.
  • Lexis is precise and idiomatic: desert, rents, bargaining power, zero-sum, conflate, counterfactual.
  • Wide and flexible structural range including a cleft, inversion and controlled parenthesis; errors are rare and minor.

Model answers written and reviewed by The English All-in-One IELTS team. They are teaching models showing what each band looks like, not real candidate scripts.

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Vocabulary for this topic

Word or phraseMeaningUsed in a sentence
desert (noun)what someone deservesWages have never tracked moral desert in any occupation.
scarcitybeing rare or in very short supplyExtreme scarcity combined with high revenue produces high pay.
bargaining powerhow much leverage someone has in negotiating payElite athletes have unusual bargaining power.
revenuethe money a business or activity brings inPlayers are paid from revenue they generate themselves.
zero-sumwhere one side can only gain if the other losesTreating this as zero-sum between athletes and nurses is a mistake.
counterfactualwhat would have happened insteadThe counterfactual to a highly paid player is a wealthier owner.
to conflateto wrongly treat two separate things as oneThe argument conflates two entirely separate payment systems.
disproportionatefar larger than seems reasonable in comparisonThe salaries look disproportionate to the work involved.

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Common questions

Is it safe to argue against the assumption in the question?

Yes, and it is often the strongest route — provided you say clearly that this is what you are doing. Examiners reward engagement with the exact wording. What fails is appearing to have misread the question, so name the premise you are rejecting in the introduction rather than leaving it implied.

Should I still discuss the other side if I disagree with it?

Yes. The Band 8.5 model gives the opposing intuition a full paragraph and calls it reasonable before answering it. Refuting a view you have first stated fairly is far more persuasive than refuting a weak version of it, and it demonstrates the range that Band 7 and above require.

Do I need economic terminology for this topic?

No. The argument works in plain language — pay follows how much money you bring in and how hard you are to replace. Reach for a technical term only when you are certain of it; a mishandled one costs more under Lexical Resource than a precise everyday phrase ever would.

Can I mention specific athletes or salaries?

You can, but there is little advantage. IELTS does not verify figures, and a named salary you half-remember adds risk without adding marks. A described comparison — a week's pay against a career's — makes the same point safely.