Band 6.0 model answer
255 wordsIn many developed countries the number of older citizens is growing quickly while the number of young people is falling. This situation creates serious problems, but governments can take several measures.
The first problem is financial. In most countries the pensions of retired people are paid from the taxes of people who work today. When there are many pensioners and few workers, the government does not collect enough money, so it must either increase taxes for young families or reduce pensions, and both decisions are very unpopular.
The second problem is medical. Older people need much more medical care than young people, and they often have several chronic illnesses at the same time. Hospitals become full, waiting lists become longer, and there are not enough nurses to look after everybody.
One solution is to increase the retirement age. People today live twenty years longer than a hundred years ago and they are healthier at sixty-five, so it is logical that they work a few years more. This gives more taxes and fewer years of pension payment.
Another solution is immigration. Young workers from other countries can pay taxes and work in hospitals and care homes, where there are not enough local employees. Governments should also help mothers to return to work by building free kindergartens, because many women want to work but they cannot find childcare.
In conclusion, an ageing population creates financial pressure and a shortage of medical care, but a later retirement age, immigration and support for working parents can reduce these difficulties.
Why this is Band 6.0
- Both parts are answered with relevant content and the solutions correspond to the problems.
- Ideas are general — 'the government should encourage families to have more children' is not developed.
- Cohesion is clear and mechanical.
- Vocabulary is adequate with repetition of old people, government and money.