Problem and Solution Education Task 2

Many students leave university with large debts that take years to repay.

A full IELTS Writing Task 2 answer to this question at Band 6.0, 7.0, 8.5, with a paragraph plan, the vocabulary that fits this topic, and the reasons each answer scores what it does.

The question

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Many students leave university with large debts that take years to repay.

What problems does this cause? What measures could be taken to help them?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

How to read this question

The strongest observation available is that student debt does not behave like ordinary debt — it is usually income-contingent, so the real damage is not repayment but the effect on decisions made in the years afterwards: what job to take, when to buy a home, whether to start a business. Framing the problems that way avoids the vague "it is stressful" answer and makes your solutions considerably more specific.

Paragraph plan

Introduction — Paraphrase, then signpost: the problems are distorted career choices and delayed adult milestones; the solutions must address cost and alternatives, not repayment terms alone.

Body 1 — Problems — graduates select for salary over vocation, and major life decisions are postponed a decade.

Body 2 — Solutions — fund shorter vocational routes properly, tie repayment to actual earnings, and make institutions share the risk of poor outcomes.

Conclusion — The debt is a symptom of pushing everyone through one expensive route; widening the routes is the durable answer.

Model answers

Band 6.0 model answer

273 words

In many countries students must borrow a large sum of money to pay for their university education, and after graduation they need many years to return it. This situation creates several problems, but there are also possible solutions.

The first problem is financial pressure on young people. A graduate starts his working life already owing thousands of dollars, so a big part of his salary goes to the bank every month. Because of this, he cannot save money for a flat, and many young people live with their parents until thirty years old or delay having children.

The second problem is that students choose their subject for the wrong reason. A student who loves history or art may study business or computer science instead, because he is afraid that he will not be able to pay his debt with a small salary. So society loses good teachers, artists and historians.

One solution is that the government should pay for part of the education, especially for subjects which the country needs, such as medicine or teaching. If a student agrees to work in a village school for five years, the government can cancel his debt.

Another solution is to develop other kinds of education. Not every job needs a four-year university degree, and short professional courses are much cheaper. If young people know that they can become a good electrician or programmer in one year, fewer of them will take a big loan.

In conclusion, student debt delays the normal life of young people and pushes them to choose subjects only for money, but government support and cheaper professional courses can reduce this problem.

Why this is Band 6.0

  • Both parts are answered and the solutions correspond loosely to the problems.
  • Ideas are relevant but general — 'the government should reduce fees' is not developed.
  • Cohesion is clear and mechanical.
  • Vocabulary is adequate with repetition of students, money and university.

Band 7.0 model answer

286 words

Graduates in many countries now begin working life carrying substantial debt. The consequences are less about the monthly repayment than about the decisions the debt quietly shapes.

The first problem is distortion of career choice. A graduate with a large balance evaluates jobs primarily by salary, which pushes able people away from teaching, research, social work and the arts and towards whatever pays most immediately. The loss is collective rather than personal: society ends up short of exactly the professions that were never well paid but that it depends on.

The second problem is postponement. Debt repayments compete directly with saving for a deposit, so home ownership, marriage and children are routinely deferred by a decade compared with the previous generation. The financial effects also compound, since years spent repaying are years not spent accumulating, and the gap never fully closes.

The most direct solution is to make repayment genuinely income-contingent, so graduates pay a percentage of earnings above a threshold and nothing below it. This removes the risk that a degree becomes a financial catastrophe for someone whose career does not pay well, and it allows lower-paid but socially necessary work to remain a viable choice.

A more fundamental remedy is to stop treating a three or four-year degree as the default route into skilled employment. Properly funded apprenticeships and shorter technical qualifications train people for well-paid work at a fraction of the cost and time, and expanding them reduces the number of people borrowing heavily for a qualification their intended job never required.

In conclusion, student debt narrows career choices and postpones adult life. Linking repayment to actual earnings addresses the immediate harm, while widening the alternatives to a full degree addresses the cause.

Why this is Band 7.0

  • The essay identifies career distortion as the central problem rather than repayment difficulty, which is a more precise diagnosis.
  • Solutions are explicitly linked to the problems and explained mechanically.
  • Less common lexis used accurately: income-contingent, vocational, deferred, incentive.
  • A good range of complex structures with only minor slips.

Band 8.5 model answer

433 words

Student debt is usually discussed as an arithmetic problem — a sum owed, a period of repayment. In systems where repayment is income-contingent, that framing understates and misplaces the harm. The damage is behavioural: it lies in the decisions the debt silently shapes during the decade after graduation, and in what its existence has done to the market for education itself.

The first consequence is the distortion of career choice. A graduate carrying a large balance assesses opportunities through the filter of what they pay now, and the professions this pushes people away from are predictable — teaching, research, social work, the arts, public service. These are not incidental occupations; they are the ones a society needs most and rewards least, and they were historically staffed by capable people who could afford to prioritise the work over the salary. Debt removes that possibility for precisely the students who had no family money to fall back on, which means the distortion is also a mechanism of social sorting.

The second is postponement, and it compounds. Repayments compete directly with saving for a deposit at exactly the age when compounding matters most, so home ownership, stable housing and family formation are deferred by years. The financial gap that opens is never fully recovered, since the missing decade of accumulation cannot be replayed later at higher earnings.

The most effective immediate remedy is to make repayment properly income-contingent — a fixed share of earnings above a threshold, nothing below it, and eventual write-off. That converts the debt from a fixed obligation into something closer to a graduate contribution, which directly addresses the career distortion: a teacher's salary stops being financially disqualifying.

That, however, treats the symptom. Two structural changes reach the cause. The first is expanding well-funded vocational routes, because a great deal of current borrowing funds degrees taken not for their content but because a degree became the entry ticket to jobs that never required one — credential inflation that costs students years and institutions nothing. The second is risk-sharing: at present a university collects fees whether or not the course improves the student's prospects, so nothing corrects a programme that reliably fails to pay off. Requiring institutions to bear part of the loss when outcomes are poor gives them a stake in the value of what they sell.

In short, the problems are a systematic narrowing of career choice and a decade of delayed adult life, both concentrated among students without family wealth. Income-contingent repayment limits the harm; widening the alternatives and making providers share the risk is what would stop it being created.

Why this is Band 8.5

  • Distinguishes the debt from its consequences and shows that the real damage is behavioural — which decisions it changes — rather than arithmetical.
  • Adds the institutional-incentive point: universities face no consequence when a course does not pay off, which most answers never consider.
  • Solutions each name the specific failure they correct, binding the two halves of the task together structurally.
  • Lexis is precise and idiomatic: income-contingent, opportunity cost, risk-sharing, credential inflation, threshold, counsel.
  • Wide structural range used flexibly, with a cleft, fronted concessives and controlled parenthesis; errors are rare and minor.

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Vocabulary for this topic

Word or phraseMeaningUsed in a sentence
income-contingentrepayment based on how much you earnIncome-contingent repayment protects low-paid graduates.
credential inflationjobs requiring higher qualifications than the work needsCredential inflation pushes people into unnecessary degrees.
risk-sharingan arrangement where providers bear part of the loss tooRisk-sharing gives universities a stake in graduate outcomes.
thresholdthe level above which a rule starts to applyGraduates repay only above an earnings threshold.
to deferto delay something until laterHome ownership is deferred by roughly a decade.
to compoundto build on itself and grow over timeLost years of saving compound into a permanent gap.

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Common questions

How do I make an economic topic feel specific?

Ask what decisions change rather than what numbers change. "Graduates avoid teaching because the salary no longer works with the repayment" is concrete and arguable; "debt causes stress" is neither. Behavioural consequences are almost always the more precise route.

Can I suggest a solution that targets institutions rather than students?

Yes, and it usually strengthens the answer. Most candidates propose remedies aimed at governments or individuals; pointing out that universities currently face no consequence for poor outcomes identifies an actor nobody else has addressed.

Should I write about my own country's system?

Only if you explain the mechanism. Systems differ enormously, so an unexplained reference may not make sense to the examiner. Describe how the repayment works and the argument travels regardless of where you are writing from.