Band 6.0 model answer
260 wordsMany employees today continue to read emails and answer messages from their manager in the evening, at the weekend and even during their holiday. This creates serious problems, but companies and governments can improve the situation.
The first problem is health. A person who never stops thinking about work cannot relax, so he sleeps badly and feels tired all the time. After some months this causes stress, headaches and sometimes depression or burnout, and then the employee must take a long sick leave, so the company also loses.
The second problem is family life. When a father answers messages during dinner or during his son's football match, he is physically present but mentally at work. Children and partners feel that they are less important than the job, and this creates conflicts at home.
One solution is a law about the right to disconnect. Some countries already decided that a company cannot demand an answer after working hours, and an employee cannot be punished if he does not reply in the evening. This protects workers who are afraid to say no to their boss.
Another solution is inside the company. Managers should not send messages at eleven o'clock at night, because employees think they must answer immediately. If the manager writes emails only during working hours and takes real holidays, the staff will do the same, because people copy the behaviour of their leader.
In conclusion, being always available damages the health of employees and their family relationships, but clear laws and better behaviour from managers can protect people's private time.
Why this is Band 6.0
- Both parts are answered and the solutions relate to the problems raised.
- Ideas are relevant but general — 'people should turn off notifications' is not developed into why they cannot.
- Cohesion is clear and mechanical.
- Vocabulary is adequate with repetition of work, employees and time.