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Opinion (Agree / Disagree) Society Task 2

Remote work has become increasingly common in recent years. Some argue this is bad tendency. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The question

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Remote work has become increasingly common in recent years. Some argue this is bad tendency. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

How to read this question

You are given one statement and asked how far you agree. The examiner is checking that you take a clear position in the introduction and hold it consistently to the conclusion — a partial agreement is fine, an unclear one is not.

Paragraph plan

Introduction — Paraphrase the prompt, state a clear conditional position — agreeing but with a nuanced condition.

Body 1 — Develop the main argument — loss of professional social connection — in depth with explanation and consequence.

Body 2 — Develop the second argument — physical and psychological health — in depth, while acknowledging where remote work is beneficial.

Conclusion — Restate the conditional position — agreeing that the tendency is harmful when remote work is exclusive, not when it is one option among many.

Model essay

Band 8.5–9.0 model essay

296 words

Working remotely has recently emerged as a more prominent employment model. According to some, this erodes workplace discipline and routines. However, in my view, remote work is beneficial for the majority and detrimental to only a small fraction of individuals.

To begin, in most cases, distance-based employment produces only favourable outcomes given its considerable advantages. First, remote working enables employees to reallocate time otherwise devoted to commuting to and from work. To clarify, those conventional workplaces often endure lengthy commutes in heavy traffic, resulting in substantial time loss. However, this concern is largely irrelevant for remote employees, who can allocate saved time to their families, fostering closer relationships and stronger family bonds. Moreover, remote work generates tangible financial benefits by minimising commuting and subsistence costs, such as fuel and business lunches. Hence, the adoption of remote work maximises the real value of remuneration by reducing unavoidable work-related expenses and increasing funds for household expenditures. Collectively, these benefits cultivate a more committed workforce and generate productivity gains.

Nevertheless, the success of remote work is heavily contingent on employees' ability to establish and maintain an effective home working environment. To illustrate, if individuals do not have a dedicated workspace, minimal distractions and clear boundaries between professional and personal life, they are unlikely to maintain focus and follow a structured routine. Instead, their performance can be easily compromised by constant interruptions, disrupting their workflow. Such mismanagement can undermine performance and output, potentially leading to the termination of the contract between the worker and the company.

To conclude, I am convinced that remote work boosts productivity rather than obscuring it by leaving more disposable income for the family budget and additional time for family interactions. However, it also remains dependent on employees' capacity to establish and maintain suitable working conditions.

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Ideas & vocabulary for this topic

Ideas you can use

  • Introduction: Paraphrase that remote work has become a more common employment model and take the position that it benefits most employees, countering the claim that it is generally a 'bad tendency', while conceding it harms only a small minority.
  • Body 1: Argue that remote work saves employees the time and cost of commuting (fuel, business lunches), leaving more disposable income and time for family, which together build a more committed and productive workforce.
  • Body 2: Concede that this depends on the employee's ability to set up a proper home working environment (a dedicated workspace, minimal distractions), since without it focus breaks down and job security can suffer.
  • Conclusion: Restate that remote work generally increases productivity and family wellbeing, but this is conditional on employees maintaining suitable working conditions at home.
Word or phraseMeaningUsed in a sentence
distance-based employmentwork carried out remotely rather than at a traditional officedistance-based employment produces only favourable outcomes given its considerable advantages.
reallocateto redirect time or resources to a different useremote working enables employees to reallocate time otherwise devoted to commuting to and from work.
subsistence costseveryday expenses needed to maintain a basic standard of livingremote work generates tangible financial benefits by minimising commuting and subsistence costs, such as fuel and business lunches.
remunerationpayment received in exchange for work performedthe adoption of remote work maximises the real value of remuneration by reducing unavoidable work-related expenses.
heavily contingent onstrongly dependent on a particular conditionthe success of remote work is heavily contingent on employees' ability to establish and maintain an effective home working environment.
dedicated workspacean area set aside solely for work tasksif individuals do not have a dedicated workspace, minimal distractions and clear boundaries... they are unlikely to maintain focus.
mismanagementpoor or careless handling of a task or responsibilitySuch mismanagement can undermine performance and output, potentially leading to the termination of the contract.
disposable incomemoney left over after essential expenses that can be spent or saved freelyremote work boosts productivity rather than obscuring it by leaving more disposable income for the family budget.

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