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Opinion (Agree / Disagree) Crime and punishment Task 2

Some people think that parents should be punished if their children commit crimes because they are responsible for their children's actions To what extent do you agree or disagree.

A full IELTS Writing Task 2 answer to this question, with a paragraph plan, ideas you can use, and the vocabulary that fits this topic.

The question

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Some people think that parents should be punished if their children commit crimes because they are responsible for their children's actions To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

How to read this question

You are given one statement and asked how far you agree. The examiner is checking that you take a clear position in the introduction and hold it consistently to the conclusion — a partial agreement is fine, an unclear one is not.

Paragraph plan

Introduction — Paraphrase the prompt and state a clear, conditional position.

Body 1 — Main argument — parental responsibility and the case for penalties.

Body 2 — Condition or limitation — when punishment is unjust.

Conclusion — Restate the conditional position clearly — no new ideas.

Model essay

Band 8.5–9.0 model essay

319 words

Some people believe that parents should face punishment when their children commit crimes, on the grounds that parents bear responsibility for their children's actions. In my view, this is only justified when parental negligence can be clearly shown to have contributed to the offence.

To begin, holding parents automatically accountable for crimes committed by their children fails to recognise that, as children mature, they develop the capacity for independent moral judgement. To clarify, by adolescence, most young people are fully capable of distinguishing right from wrong and understanding the consequences of their actions, meaning that a crime committed at this age reflects a personal choice rather than a failure of upbringing alone, particularly when it occurs outside the parents' knowledge or supervision. Punishing parents for decisions made independently by a teenager who was raised responsibly would be both unjust and counterproductive, since it would penalise diligent parents for behaviour they had no realistic way of preventing, regardless of how carefully they had raised their child.

However, there are circumstances in which parental responsibility is genuinely warranted. This is attributable to the fact that some parents demonstrably fail in their basic duty of supervision, for instance by allowing a young child unrestricted access to weapons or by ignoring repeated warnings from schools about a child's violent behaviour. In such cases, the parents' negligence directly enables the offence, making it reasonable for the law to hold them partly accountable alongside the child, since their inaction removed a safeguard that should have prevented the crime. Distinguishing between these two scenarios requires courts to examine the specific circumstances of each case rather than applying a blanket rule to every family.

To conclude, I disagree that parents should be routinely punished whenever their children commit crimes, since older children bear responsibility for their own choices, but I agree that punishment is justified in the narrower cases where clear parental negligence directly facilitated the offence.

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Ideas & vocabulary for this topic

Ideas you can use

  • Introduction: Paraphrase the claim that parents should be punished for their children's crimes because they are responsible for their children's actions, and state agreement only where clear parental negligence contributed to the offence.
  • Body 1: Argue that automatically punishing parents ignores that adolescents can distinguish right from wrong, so a crime committed independently by a responsibly raised teenager reflects personal choice, not parental failure.
  • Body 2: Argue that punishment is justified in narrower cases where clear parental negligence, such as failing to secure weapons or ignoring school warnings, directly enabled the offence.
  • Conclusion: Restate disagreement with routinely punishing parents but agreement that it is justified specifically where clear negligence facilitated the crime.
Word or phraseMeaningUsed in a sentence
negligencefailure to take proper care over somethingthis is only justified when parental negligence can be clearly shown to have contributed to the offence.
independent moral judgementthe ability to decide right from wrong for oneselfas children mature, they develop the capacity for independent moral judgement.
counterproductivehaving the opposite effect to what was intendedwould be both unjust and counterproductive.
diligentshowing care and conscientious effortit would penalise diligent parents for behaviour they had no realistic way of preventing.
duty of supervisionthe responsibility to watch over and guide someonesome parents demonstrably fail in their basic duty of supervision.
unrestricted accessthe ability to reach or use something without limitsallowing a young child unrestricted access to weapons.
safeguarda measure taken to protect against harmtheir inaction removed a safeguard that should have prevented the crime.
blanket rulea rule applied uniformly to all cases without exceptionrather than applying a blanket rule to every family.

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