Band 6.0 model answer
263 wordsThe number of passengers travelling by plane increases every year, although everybody knows that aviation damages the environment. This creates serious problems, but there are some possible solutions.
The first problem is pollution. Aeroplanes burn a very large quantity of fuel and produce carbon dioxide high in the atmosphere, where the effect is even stronger. One return flight from Europe to Asia produces more emissions than a person produces in a whole year by driving a car, so the damage of this industry is enormous.
The second problem is that it is very difficult to change this technology. Cars can use electricity, and factories can use solar or wind energy, but a battery is too heavy for a big aeroplane flying ten hours. So we cannot simply replace the fuel with a clean alternative in the next few years.
One solution is to make flying more expensive. At the moment aviation fuel is not taxed in many countries, although petrol for cars is taxed heavily. If governments removed this advantage, tickets would cost more and fewer people would fly for a weekend.
Another solution is to develop fast trains. For a journey of five hundred kilometres, a modern train takes almost the same time as a plane if we count waiting at the airport, and it pollutes much less. If governments invest in railways and make tickets cheaper, many short flights will disappear.
In conclusion, air travel produces a large quantity of emissions and has no clean alternative today, but taxing fuel fairly and building good railways can reduce the number of flights.
Why this is Band 6.0
- Both parts are answered and the solutions correspond to the problems.
- Ideas are relevant but general — 'people should fly less' is not developed into how.
- Cohesion is clear and mechanical.
- Vocabulary is adequate with repetition of planes, pollution and people.