Band 6.0 model answer
255 wordsAlmost everybody today knows about global warming, but most people continue to drive, to fly and to buy things exactly as before. There are several reasons for this, and there are also ways to change the situation.
The first reason is that the problem seems far away. A person cannot see the temperature rising in his own street, and scientists speak about the year 2070. When a problem is not visible today, people always think about it tomorrow.
The second reason is that changing is difficult and expensive. Electric cars cost much more than normal cars, and the bus takes one hour when the car takes twenty minutes. Also, many people think that their small action changes nothing, because factories and big companies produce much more pollution than one family.
To change this, governments should make the green choice cheaper. If public transport is fast and cheap and electric cars have lower taxes, people will choose them not because of the environment but because it is better for their money. This works much faster than advertisements about the planet.
Another idea is to show people what their neighbours do. Some electricity companies write in the bill how much energy the customer used compared with similar families, and after this many people reduce their consumption, because nobody wants to be the worst in the street.
In conclusion, people do not change because the danger seems distant and the alternative is expensive, but cheaper green options and social comparison can persuade them much better than information alone.
Why this is Band 6.0
- Both questions are answered with relevant content.
- Ideas are general — the essay states that changing is inconvenient without explaining the underlying structure.
- Cohesion is clear and mechanical.
- Vocabulary is adequate with repetition of people, climate and change.