Direct / Two-part Question Volunteering Task 2

Rates of volunteering have fallen in many communities.

A full IELTS Writing Task 2 answer to this question at Band 6.0, 7.0, 8.5, with a paragraph plan, the vocabulary that fits this topic, and the reasons each answer scores what it does.

The question

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Rates of volunteering have fallen in many communities.

Why do you think this is? How could more people be encouraged to volunteer?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

How to read this question

The most useful causal point is that volunteering was historically sustained by people who had discretionary time and a fixed local base — and both have gone. The second useful point is that organisations have made volunteering harder without noticing: checks, training and rotas turned a favour into an application process. That gives the second question a specific target rather than a general appeal for community spirit.

Paragraph plan

Introduction — Paraphrase, then signpost both answers: the decline follows from time pressure, mobility and increased administrative friction; the remedy is to lower the cost of taking part.

Body 1 — Why — dual-earner households and long commutes removed the discretionary hours, mobility weakened local attachment, and formalisation added barriers.

Body 2 — How to encourage it — micro-volunteering, employer-supported time, and removing the bureaucratic burden from small-scale help.

Conclusion — The willingness did not disappear; the available time and the ease of taking part did, and only one of those can be restored quickly.

Model answers

Band 6.0 model answer

274 words

In the past many people helped in their local community, for example in a sport club, a church or an organisation for old people, but today fewer people do this. There are several reasons, and there are also ways to change the situation.

The first reason is time. In most families now both parents work full time, and many people travel one or two hours to their office. When they come home, they must cook, clean and help the children with homework, so they simply have no free hours in the week.

The second reason is that people move very often. Before, a person was born, worked and died in the same town, so he knew everybody and he wanted to help his neighbours. Today young people move to another city for study or work, and they do not feel any connection with the place where they rent a flat.

Another reason is that volunteering became complicated. Now an organisation asks for documents, a police check and training courses before a person can help for two hours, and many people give up.

To encourage volunteering, organisations should offer short and simple tasks. If a person can help for one hour on Saturday without long preparation, many more people will agree.

In addition, companies could give their employees one or two paid days every year for volunteering. This solves the problem of time, and it is also good advertising for the company.

In conclusion, people volunteer less because they have no free time, they move often and the process is complicated, but short tasks and paid days from employers could bring many of them back.

Why this is Band 6.0

  • Both questions are answered with relevant content.
  • Ideas are general and stated rather than developed.
  • Cohesion is clear and mechanical.
  • Vocabulary is adequate with repetition of people, time and help.

Band 7.0 model answer

314 words

Participation in local voluntary activity has fallen substantially in many communities. The causes are practical rather than moral, and that is encouraging, because practical obstacles can be removed.

The most important cause is the disappearance of discretionary time. Volunteering was historically sustained by people with hours they controlled — households with one earner, and workers with short local commutes. With most households now having two full-time earners and considerably longer journeys, the weekday evenings and Saturday mornings that voluntary organisations relied upon have largely gone.

Mobility is a second factor. Volunteering depends on attachment to a particular place, and attachment takes years to form. People now move far more often for work and study, and someone renting in a city for two years has neither the local knowledge nor the sense of belonging that would prompt them to run a club or organise a collection.

A third cause is rarely mentioned but significant: volunteering has become formalised. Background checks, training requirements, insurance and fixed rotas are individually sensible and collectively convert an informal favour into an application process. Someone willing to give two hours will not complete four weeks of onboarding to do so.

The remedies follow. Organisations should offer genuinely short, unscheduled tasks that require no long commitment, since many people who cannot promise every Tuesday could help occasionally. Employers can also provide paid volunteering days, which supplies the missing resource directly rather than asking people to find it.

Finally, the administrative burden should be proportionate to the task. Roles involving vulnerable people plainly require checks; helping at a one-off litter pick does not, and applying the same process to both deters exactly the casual participation that used to sustain community life.

In conclusion, volunteering has declined because time, local attachment and ease of entry have all reduced, and the most effective responses lower the cost of participating rather than appeal to conscience.

Why this is Band 7.0

  • The essay identifies formalisation as a cause, which most answers miss entirely.
  • The remedies address the specific barriers described.
  • Less common lexis used accurately: discretionary, attachment, administrative, commitment.
  • A good range of complex structures with only minor slips.

Band 8.5 model answer

442 words

Declining volunteering is usually explained by saying people have become more individualistic. The evidence does not support that: stated willingness to help locally has remained broadly stable, and charitable giving has not collapsed. What has changed is the set of conditions that used to convert willingness into hours — and one of those changes was made, unintentionally, by voluntary organisations themselves.

The largest cause is the disappearance of discretionary time. Community organisations were historically staffed by people who had reliable unallocated hours: households with a single earner, and workers whose commute was short because they lived near their work. Both have gone. With two full-time earners, longer journeys and school schedules that assume an adult available, the weekday evenings and Saturday mornings on which committees, clubs and rotas depended have been absorbed by paid work and its logistics.

The second cause is mobility, which erodes the attachment volunteering runs on. Willingness to organise a local event depends on knowing the place and expecting to remain in it, and both accumulate slowly. Someone renting for two years in a city they may leave has neither, and the social capital that a settled population builds without effort simply does not form.

The third cause is self-inflicted. Volunteering has been progressively formalised — background checks, induction, training modules, insurance requirements, fixed commitments. Each measure is defensible in isolation and often legally required, but together they have converted an informal favour into an application process. A person willing to give two hours on a Saturday will not complete a month of onboarding for the privilege, so the friction filters out precisely the casual, low-commitment help that once made up the bulk of it.

The remedies therefore need to target barriers rather than motivation. The most effective is designing for episodic participation: single-occasion tasks, drop-in sessions, and roles that do not require promising every week. Many people who cannot commit to a rota can genuinely help four times a year, and organisations structured entirely around regular attendance never ask them.

Employer-supported volunteering addresses the time constraint directly by supplying the missing resource rather than requesting that people locate it in evenings they do not have. And administrative requirements should be scaled to the actual risk — work with children or vulnerable adults plainly warrants checks, while a litter pick or a food bank sorting shift does not, and applying an identical process to both is the clearest example of a sensible rule producing a perverse outcome.

In short, the decline reflects lost time, weakened local attachment and increased friction rather than diminished goodwill. Two of those can be addressed relatively quickly, which is where effort should go.

Why this is Band 8.5

  • Argues that willingness has not declined but the conditions supporting it have, which redirects the whole answer away from moral explanation.
  • Identifies formalisation as a self-inflicted cause, which is a genuinely non-obvious and specific point.
  • Each remedy targets a named barrier, so the two halves interlock structurally.
  • Lexis is precise and idiomatic: discretionary time, social capital, friction, onboarding, episodic, proportionate.
  • Wide structural range used flexibly, with a cleft, fronted concessives and controlled parenthesis; errors are rare and minor.

Model answers written and reviewed by The English All-in-One IELTS team. They are teaching models showing what each band looks like, not real candidate scripts.

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Vocabulary for this topic

Word or phraseMeaningUsed in a sentence
discretionary timehours a person can freely choose how to useVolunteering depended on discretionary time that has now gone.
social capitalthe networks and trust that make a community workFrequent moving prevents social capital from forming.
frictionobstacles that make taking part harder than it needs to beFormalisation added friction that filters out casual helpers.
onboardingthe process of joining and being trained for a roleNobody completes four weeks of onboarding to give two hours.
episodichappening occasionally rather than regularlyDesigning for episodic participation reaches people who cannot commit weekly.
proportionatematched in scale to the actual risk or needChecks should be proportionate to the task.

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Common questions

How do I avoid blaming society for a decline?

Test the moral explanation before accepting it. If stated willingness has not fallen, then individualism is not the cause and you need a structural one — which is both more accurate and far more useful, because structures can be changed and character cannot.

Is it effective to identify a self-inflicted cause?

It is one of the strongest moves available. Pointing out that organisations made volunteering harder while trying to make it safer shows genuine analysis, and it hands you a remedy that nobody else in the room has proposed.

Should each solution match a specific cause?

Yes — on two-part questions that pairing is precisely what examiners check. Naming the barrier inside the solution sentence makes the link visible and prevents the second half drifting into unrelated suggestions.