Direct / Two-part Question Work and employment Task 2

Fewer young people in many countries are choosing to train for skilled manual trades such as plumbing or carpentry.

A full IELTS Writing Task 2 answer to this question at Band 6.0, 7.0, 8.5, with a paragraph plan, the vocabulary that fits this topic, and the reasons each answer scores what it does.

The question

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Fewer young people in many countries are choosing to train for skilled manual trades such as plumbing or carpentry.

Why do you think this is happening? What could be done to encourage more of them?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

How to read this question

Two direct questions, and both must be answered with roughly equal space. Missing the second is the fastest way to cap this essay at Band 5 for Task Response, and it happens constantly when candidates get absorbed in the causes. The other requirement is specific to this type: your proposals should address the causes you gave. If you blame status and then propose better funding, the two halves of the essay are about different problems.

Paragraph plan

Introduction — Paraphrase, then signpost both answers: the causes are status and the expansion of university; the remedies are visibility and a credible alternative route.

Body 1 — Why — decades of policy and parental advice treating university as the definition of success, plus the invisibility of trades in schools.

Body 2 — What could be done — restore a serious apprenticeship route, make earnings visible, and get trades physically into schools.

Conclusion — The shortage is a status problem before it is a training problem, so the remedy has to change perception as well as provision.

Model answers

Band 6.0 model answer

252 words

In many countries today, not many young people want to become plumbers, electricians or carpenters. There are several reasons for this situation, and governments and schools can take some steps to change it.

The main reason is that these jobs do not have a good image. Parents and teachers usually tell children that they must go to university, because they think office work is more respectable than working with your hands. Young people hear this message from childhood, so they believe that a manual job means they failed at school.

Another reason is that students do not know much about these professions. At school they learn mathematics, history and languages, but nobody explains how to become an electrician or how much an electrician earns. Many young people would be surprised to know that a good plumber can earn more than an office worker.

To solve this problem, schools should invite people from these professions to talk with students and show them the real work. If a student can visit a workshop and try the job for one day, his opinion may change completely.

In addition, the government should create more apprenticeship programmes where young people can earn money while they are learning. Many families cannot pay for long studies, so a paid programme is very attractive for them.

In conclusion, young people avoid manual trades because of social opinion and because of a lack of information, but school programmes and paid apprenticeships could encourage more of them to choose these useful careers.

Why this is Band 6.0

  • Both questions are answered, which is the essential requirement, and the suggestions relate to the causes given.
  • Ideas are relevant but general: the essay says parents want university without explaining how that reaches the student's decision.
  • Cohesion is clear and mechanical, with a connector at the start of each paragraph.
  • Vocabulary is adequate, with job, work and young people repeated throughout.

Band 7.0 model answer

295 words

Skilled manual trades such as plumbing, carpentry and electrical work are attracting far fewer young entrants than they once did, despite persistent shortages. The reasons are largely about status rather than about the work itself, and any effective response has to begin there.

The principal cause is a long shift in what counts as success. For thirty years governments have measured schools by how many students they send to university, and that target has been passed down to teachers and parents as straightforward advice: an academic route is achievement, a vocational one is what remains if you fail. Young people absorb this well before they are old enough to evaluate it. The situation is made worse by simple invisibility — a student may spend twelve years in a school without ever meeting an electrician, being shown what the work involves, or learning what it pays, so the option is never really considered and rejected; it is never presented at all.

The remedies therefore need to address perception as much as provision. Bringing tradespeople into schools, and taking students into workshops for genuine placements rather than a single talk, makes the work concrete at the age when choices are actually being formed. Making earnings visible matters too, since many families are unaware that an experienced tradesperson frequently out-earns a graduate who leaves university with substantial debt. Alongside this, a properly funded apprenticeship route that pays while it trains removes the financial barrier and, just as importantly, signals that the path is a serious one rather than a consolation.

In conclusion, the decline stems from the low prestige attached to manual work and from young people never encountering it as a real option. Increasing exposure in schools and building a well-paid, well-regarded apprenticeship system would address both.

Why this is Band 7.0

  • Both questions are answered at similar length and the remedies map directly onto the causes identified — the requirement that most often separates 7 from 6 on this type.
  • The causes are traced through a mechanism: how a policy target became parental advice and then a student's assumption.
  • Less common lexis used accurately: vocational, apprenticeship, prestige, incentive.
  • Varied structures with good control; a few awkward phrasings but nothing that impedes meaning.

Band 8.5 model answer

429 words

Skilled trades are short of entrants almost everywhere in the developed world, and the shortage has persisted through periods when the pay was good and graduate employment was not. That combination is the interesting part: if wages alone determined choices, this problem would have corrected itself years ago. The explanation lies in status, and the remedies that work are the ones that take status seriously rather than treating it as something young people ought to grow out of.

The decisive cause is a change in how success came to be measured. University participation is easy to count, so it became the proxy governments used to judge schools, and a target of that kind does not stay inside a ministry — it descends into league tables, then into how teachers advise, and finally into what a fifteen-year-old understands about their own worth. Within a generation the vocational route stopped being a different choice and became a consolation prize, taken by those who could not manage the other one. The effect is self-reinforcing: as abler students are steered away, the perception is confirmed by who remains.

Invisibility does the rest of the work. A student can pass through twelve years of education without meeting a tradesperson, seeing the work, or learning what it earns — which means the trades are not weighed and rejected but never enter the comparison. It is worth noting how strange this is: schools routinely explain university applications in detail and leave a career that begins earning immediately, without debt, entirely undescribed.

The remedies follow from those two causes rather than from the usual reflex, which is to propose higher pay. Pay is frequently already competitive; a skilled tradesperson with a few years' experience commonly out-earns a graduate carrying substantial debt, and the fact that this is not widely believed is itself evidence that the problem is informational. What is required first is exposure: extended placements rather than a careers talk, run early enough to influence subject choices, and taught by people doing the work. Second, apprenticeships have to be rebuilt as a demanding, selective route with a recognised qualification at the end — parity of esteem is not achieved by insisting on it but by making the entry standard high enough that reaching it means something.

In short, young people are avoiding these trades because education has spent three decades signalling that doing so is what ambition looks like, and because nothing in their schooling contradicts that signal. Changing the signal, and letting them see the work, would do more than any further increase in wages.

Why this is Band 8.5

  • Both questions are answered fully, in balance, and the second half is explicitly built on the first — each proposal names the cause it targets.
  • The causal analysis goes beyond "low status" to a mechanism: a measurable policy target reshaped the advice students receive, which explains why the decline was gradual and universal.
  • Anticipates and dismisses the obvious weak answer (pay more), which demonstrates evaluation rather than listing.
  • Lexis is precise and idiomatic: proxy, consolation prize, self-reinforcing, parity of esteem, counterfactual.
  • Wide and flexible structural range, including a cleft, fronted concessives and controlled parenthesis; errors are rare and minor.

Model answers written and reviewed by The English All-in-One IELTS team. They are teaching models showing what each band looks like, not real candidate scripts.

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Vocabulary for this topic

Word or phraseMeaningUsed in a sentence
vocationalrelating to training for a specific skilled jobThe vocational route came to be seen as second best.
apprenticeshipa paid training position where you learn a trade on the jobA funded apprenticeship removes the financial barrier to training.
prestigethe respect and status attached to somethingManual trades suffer from a lack of prestige rather than of pay.
proxysomething measured because it is easy to count, standing in for what mattersUniversity entry became the proxy for a school's success.
parity of esteembeing regarded as equally valuable and respectableVocational education has never achieved parity of esteem.
self-reinforcingproducing conditions that make itself stronger over timeThe perception is self-reinforcing, since abler students are steered away.
consolation prizesomething given to someone who has failed to winTrades became a consolation prize rather than a choice.
to out-earnto earn more than someone elseAn experienced tradesperson often out-earns a recent graduate.

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Common questions

Do I have to answer both questions equally?

Roughly equally, yes. Two direct questions means two obligations, and running out of time before the second is the most common way this type is capped at Band 5 for Task Response. If time is short, write a shorter second paragraph rather than none.

Must my solutions match the causes I gave?

Yes — this is what examiners look for on two-part questions. If your causes are about status and your solutions are about funding, you have written two essays about different problems. Naming the cause inside the solution sentence is a simple way to guarantee the link is visible.

Can I answer the first question with only one reason?

You can, if it is developed thoroughly. One cause traced through a real mechanism is stronger than three listed. Just make sure the depth is genuine and not the same idea restated.

Should the introduction preview both answers?

A brief signpost helps — it tells the examiner immediately that you have registered both questions. Keep it to one sentence; a long preview eats time that development needs.