Band 6.0 model answer
265 wordsThe number of crimes committed on the internet grows every year, and the police cannot investigate all of them. This creates serious problems for ordinary people, but there are ways to improve the situation.
The first problem is that these criminals are almost never caught. A person can sit in one country and steal money from people in twenty other countries. The local police cannot arrest him because he is abroad, and international cooperation takes years, so most criminals continue working without any fear.
The second problem is the effect on victims. Many people lose their savings and cannot get the money back from the bank, because the bank says that the customer himself confirmed the payment. In addition, victims often feel ashamed and do not tell anybody, especially older people, so the real number of these crimes is much higher than the official statistics.
One solution is to make banks more responsible. If a bank must return the money to the victim, it will invest in better systems that stop a suspicious payment before it leaves the account. Banks have the technology to see that a customer suddenly sends a large sum to an unknown account.
Another solution is education. Governments and banks should explain the most common tricks on television and in schools, because many people still do not know that a message from 'the bank' asking for a password is always false.
In conclusion, online fraud is very difficult to punish and destroys the savings of many families, but stronger responsibility for banks and public education can reduce the number of victims.
Why this is Band 6.0
- Both parts are answered and the solutions relate to the problems raised.
- Ideas are general — 'police need more training' is not developed into why that would be insufficient.
- Cohesion is clear and mechanical.
- Vocabulary is adequate with repetition of criminals, money and internet.