Band 6.0 model answer
270 wordsMany people spend four years at university studying one subject and then work in a completely different area. There are several reasons for this, and it has both positive and negative effects on the graduates.
The first reason is age. Students must choose their specialisation when they are seventeen or eighteen years old. At this age they have never worked, they do not know what a real office looks like, and they often choose a subject because they liked the teacher at school or because their parents recommended it.
Another reason is the job market. Many companies do not ask for a specific subject; they only want a person with a university diploma, because this shows that the candidate can work hard and finish a long task. So a graduate of history can work in a bank without any problem.
The effects on graduates are mixed. On the positive side, university teaches skills which are useful everywhere: how to find information, how to write a clear report and how to organise your time. These skills help in any profession.
However, there are also negative effects. Many students pay a lot of money and spend four or five years, and later they feel that this time was wasted. Some of them must study again for a new profession, and this is expensive and difficult when a person already has a family.
In conclusion, students often study a subject they never use because they choose too early and because employers do not care about the subject, and this gives them useful general skills but also costs a lot of time and money.
Why this is Band 6.0
- Both questions are answered, which is the essential requirement, and the content is relevant.
- Ideas are general — the essay states that students choose badly without explaining why they cannot choose better.
- Cohesion is clear and mechanical.
- Vocabulary is adequate with repetition of students, subject and job.