Band 6.0 model answer
275 wordsIn many countries young people leave their villages and small towns and move to big cities. This creates problems both for the rural areas and for the cities, but governments can take some measures.
The first problem is that villages slowly die. When young families leave, there are not enough children for the school, so the school closes. Then the next family must move because there is no education for their children, and after some years the shop and the medical point also close because there are too few customers and patients.
The second problem is that only old people stay. These people need medical help and someone to bring them food and medicine, but their children live five hundred kilometres away. So exactly the people who need the most help live in the place with the fewest services.
One solution is a good internet connection. Today many jobs can be done from home, and a programmer or a designer can live in a village and work for a company in the capital. If the government brings fast internet to rural areas, young families may stay or even come back, because houses there are much cheaper.
Another solution is to keep services open in a different way. Instead of closing a small school, several villages can share one school with a free bus, and a mobile clinic can visit each village once a week. This is cheaper than a full hospital and it keeps people in the area.
In conclusion, rural areas lose their services and keep only elderly residents, but fast internet and shared services can make these places attractive for young families again.
Why this is Band 6.0
- Both parts are answered and the solutions relate to the problems.
- Ideas are relevant but general — 'the government should create jobs' is not developed.
- Cohesion is clear and mechanical.
- Vocabulary is adequate with repetition of village, young people and work.